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Review of chapter "Balanced Origin" from Dragonhulk
Review:
Superb work. I loved the way you had this Witch Blade come into being, and the way you seamlessly integrated the Gargoyles Fey was very well done.

I hope RL isn't going too bad for you and that you'll be back to working on this soon, it really is an excellent work of fiction.
Review By [Dragonhulk] • Date [21 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Balanced Origin" from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
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I come back to read this from time to time as it is a personal favorite. The rereads haven't detracted from it. Good work and hope to see more some day!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [7 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Balanced Origin" from (Recent Donor)tchizek
Review:
Wonderful story!
I loved the chapters where Xanders aspects were separated, that was very cute.
I love Syeira she adds great depth, a good foil for Xander.
Nice handling of the Witchblade's interaction with it's carriers before getting to Xander, then Xander after arriving in Sunnydale.

I will be tracking this!
Review By [(Recent Donor)tchizek] • Date [16 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Balanced Origin" from Duquette
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This is incredible, your story is detailed and full of life, your characters are beautifully drawn and just breath depth into your work, and I don't think I've ever read a more convincing or entertaining back story. Needless to say this is one of the better pieces of fiction I've read all year, and by far the best comic book adaptation I've ever seen. I hope you plan to continue this, and that your life allows you the time to write, cause man do you have a gift for it.
Review By [Duquette] • Date [5 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Balanced Origin" from garrycooper
Review:
This is very good. I was not expecting a Witchblade crossover. Thank you and write more when you can.
Review By [garrycooper] • Date [28 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "It Awakens" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
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nice to see Xander starts thinking and I can't wait to see what happens when the blade reaches
SD :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [21 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Balanced Origin" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [4 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Balanced Origin" from mlock
Review:
Thanks for the update. I like the origin story. Will there be any elements from TNT's Witchblade included in the story? As for Xanatos, will he become Xander's Kenneth Irons?
Review By [mlock] • Date [2 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Balanced Origin" from Gideon
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I like the origin story, very dark but quite fitting, with touches of tragic sacrifice just like the slayer story. With that much power the WB should be able to do even more than Xander could imagine, at least before the ritual. Nice work on making Ted be tougher than in canon. That worked quite well. hearing Buffy spout Watcher's Council propaganda is very sad though. I hope she isn't too mad at Xander when she realises he was there for that conversation.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [29 Mar 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Balanced Origin" from demonichellfire
Review:
great chapter
Review By [demonichellfire] • Date [26 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Balanced Origin" from Loatroll
Review:
Great stuff! Thanks for the tremendous read!

Very well crafted story. I like how you've involved the Kalderdash clan in this. One of the most interesting powerupped Xander stories I've read in some time.
Review By [Loatroll] • Date [26 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Balanced Origin" from souldriven
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I forgot to leave a review when I first read this chapter and i am very sorry about that. Love the origin for the Buffyverse witchblade even if its on the sad side. I like how Xander gets excused away as a golem but certainly is displaying personality in his armor. Will that raise a red flag with Giles or are golems expected to be a little quirky? Not enough data?

Anyways, i am still greatly enjoying this story and look forward to more.
Review By [souldriven] • Date [21 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Balanced Origin" from prehensileclaw
Review:
This is an excellent story. Your origin story was very interesting. I think you mentioned a concern about your action scenes at one point, but you have nothing to worry about.

Thanks for writing and sharing this.

P.S. Xander's reaction to the origin story was perfect.
Review By [prehensileclaw] • Date [20 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Balanced Origin" from SilverWave
Review:
Well that was good!

Cheers :-)
Review By [SilverWave] • Date [18 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Balanced Origin" from Mordare
Review:
As always I love your story. Great way to bring the Witchblade into the world. It does fit well with the Buffyverse. Looking forward to more.
Review By [Mordare] • Date [18 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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