Review of chapter "What happens in the library" from
BobbokyReview:
good
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Bobboky] • Date [25 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What happens in the library" from
warReview:
good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Review By [
war] • Date [25 Mar 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Came A Hero!" from
BobbokyReview:
very good work
Review By [
Bobboky] • Date [23 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
erikthevikingReview:
A well written opening.
Review By [
eriktheviking] • Date [23 Mar 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
BobbokyReview:
nice
Review By [
Bobboky] • Date [23 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
SamDragonReview:
And now I have to look up Freedom Force.Don't remember that one.
Nice start.
Review By [
SamDragon] • Date [22 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
ValandarReview:
Heheh, awesome. Longtime member of the Freedom Reborn fansite for Freedom Force (the videogame), and the second I saw the title, an image of Minute Man swinging his "sticky thing" (as his staff got known in the community) popped into my head.
So... are any of the revelations from FF vs The Third Reich going to make themselves known? And who is going to be trapped as Iron Maiden (which I assume is a gender flipped Manbot)?
Personally, I would have considered having Buffy as Law and Angel as Order... that would REALLY mess things up. Or even more evilly, Drusilla as Law and Spike as Order...
Comments from author:
Actually I am holding on that and spoilers will never occur in review comments. That being said I might be inspired by you
by your meshes or otherwise. Iron Maiden is a gender flipped Manbot as is La Diabla.
Review By [
Valandar] • Date [22 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
warReview:
good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
The next chapter will be forthcoming in a couple days.
Review By [
war] • Date [22 Mar 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
djhardimReview:
Not bad, but I think you need to take another look at Cordy's grades. I can't see her getting an F in history, or a C in gym.
Comments from author:
I manipulated the grades for the contest between Xander and Cordy.
Review By [
djhardim] • Date [22 Mar 11] • Not Rated
