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Review of chapter "Part Six" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
just rereading this story and wondering when and if there will ever be another update. Pretty please? don't give up on this.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [24 Apr 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Six" from bradsan
Review:
good so far. I would love to read more.

soooooooo update pleassssse
Review By [bradsan] • Date [6 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Six" from Aista
Review:
There are a number of elements in this story that I like. I know that some readers may have had trouble with how you've sequenced the chapters, personally I like not having everything in chronological order with POVs worked out ahead of time - keeps me on my toes as a reader. For pure artistic writing the first chapter was great, it was incredibly emotive. Another favourite was the last scene, the heart-to-heart with Zuko. So far an enjoyable read - I'm curious to see where you take this!
Comments from author:
Thanks. This is a story that is supposed to be all in good fun, but it keeps trying to take itself too seriously. I just wanted a little laughter mixed with introspection.
Review By [Aista] • Date [21 Oct 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Six" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [14 Jul 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Six" from Genuka
Review:
I love how you're doing this and can't wait for the next update.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [26 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Six" from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
Hmmm...so Zuko doesn't join with his sister at end of Season 2 here.

Ah well, as in any AtLA fic, I'm always rooting for Azula. Bow before Her Royal Evilness, The Rightful Firelord, and cede her control of the world. :-)
Comments from author:
Heh... I don't think Azula will come out on top in this fic. But who knows? Certainly not me. *Wink*
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [21 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Six" from Cristina
Review:
Update yey!!!


This new chapter (and I re read entire story after reading this one chapter), was realy realy good. You have characters personalties down.

Good job!
Comments from author:
Thanks. Hopefully, it won't take forever for the next part.
Review By [Cristina] • Date [21 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Six" from (Past Donor)chrysanne
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YESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Review By [(Past Donor)chrysanne] • Date [21 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Six" from Oxnate
Review:
Glad to see this updated. Would be very interesting from what I remember of AtLAB if Zuko were to go with Aang at that point.
Review By [Oxnate] • Date [20 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Six" from stopwatch
Review:
Please continue this story.
Review By [stopwatch] • Date [20 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Six" from Discord
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*happy dance*
Review By [Discord] • Date [20 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Six" from nadirjohn
Review:
Thanks for the chapter enjoying the series. Fun thing Monday I was wishing for a new chapter.
Comments from author:
That often happens to me, too. I think about a fic for the first time in forever and it then updates.
Review By [nadirjohn] • Date [20 Jun 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Six" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
Loving it. I just had a thought if Lee is on the good side who hires sparky sparky boom man? LOL so looking forward to more I can't even tell you. It was a treat to read this today kind of a get well prezzie. (I am sick it is sad)
Comments from author:
Thanks. You'll just have to wait and see about him. :)

I felt guilty for not updating for so long. Sorry.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [20 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Six" from Macfeste
Review:
Interesting. I wouldn't have made the connection between Ozai and Hank, but I suppose disappointment in your father can't always end in disfiguring facial scars.
Comments from author:
There are differing levels of crappy parenting. Ozai was more hands on. Quite literally, I suppose.
Review By [Macfeste] • Date [20 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part One" from Compston
Review:
Hn... Interesting start to the story. Let's see where it goes....
Review By [Compston] • Date [20 Jun 13] • Rating [5 out of 10]
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