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Review of chapter "Part Five" from Macfeste
Review:
This is REALLY good. It's the only A:TLA cross I've read where it doesn't feel forced. It's just, you know, how it would go. Great great job.
Comments from author:
Thanks! I have a plot worked out, and sometimes, I even follow it. :)

I just wanted something that fit well with both series.
Review By [Macfeste] • Date [13 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part One" from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
Um...this first chapter is a little jarring. Is this a story where Buffy can just ignore any supernatural attacks if she feels like it, for no real reason given, other than she's the Slayer (a status which has apparently suddenly started granting her magic resistance)? And if so, why bother dodging the fire attacks? If she's immune to bending attacks, why not just stand there and laugh at Azula's attempts to bend at her? Or is it just lightning, and if so, why? This doesn't really make sense.
Comments from author:
I'm sorry you think that. She's not resistant to all attacks. Just certain ones. I can't give too much away without spoilers.
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [18 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Five" from (Current Donor)Luna
Review:
It's alive! ALIVE!!

yay :)
Review By [(Current Donor)Luna] • Date [12 Jan 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Five" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [9 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Five" from ScreamingFlamingos
Review:
Wonderful!!!! You really have the characters down! Can't wait for more!
Review By [ScreamingFlamingos] • Date [29 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Five" from Discord
Review:
Thanks for the update! :)
Review By [Discord] • Date [29 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Five" from angrymonkey
Review:
Great chapter, I think this is about the only story I follow on this site anymore.
Comments from author:
*Blushes* Thanks!
Review By [angrymonkey] • Date [29 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Five" from AnFan
Review:
Glad for the still not dead part. I really like this one.
Comments from author:
Yep. Still here. Thanks.
Review By [AnFan] • Date [29 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Five" from TheTurnCoat
Review:
I really like the story so far, especially since Zuko isn't going back to the fire nation. Also, since Katara didn't have to use the spirit water, will they end up using it for something else? Looking forward to your next update.

Thanks for writing :)
Comments from author:
I always thought Zuko betraying Iroh and going back to his daddy was a stupid idea. But that's something I'll have to address, I suppose. It really depends on how big of an impact Buffy had while hanging out with them. In my mind, she was with them for several weeks. Long enough to make several comments on their relationship and perhaps be a tad bit jealous of how close they are. Since really, her own father sucked, and Giles... well, the less said about what happened in canon the better.

Spirit water... :)
Review By [TheTurnCoat] • Date [29 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Five" from Valkyrie
Review:
It's nice to read another part. A bit of advice though: had I not known which part in the Avatar universe this was, I'd be completely lost now. Try to describe things a bit more.
Comments from author:
They just left Ba Sing Se. Only the interludes are out of order chronologically. Plus, I wanted it to be confusing since Buffy has absolutely no clue what's happening over half the time.

I'll try to do better though.
Review By [Valkyrie] • Date [29 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Five" from brokenmimir
Review:
Still not dead -- and still fantastic.

Keep up the excellent work!
Review By [brokenmimir] • Date [29 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Five" from CageFire
Review:
Nice to see a new chapter. I'll be looking forward to reading more. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [29 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Five" from (Past Donor)FireDragon
Review:
yay awesome update. And I have been thinking, I think Appa could fly with a bear on his back but only for a little while, because in that one episode they have to walk to the airbending temple because "Appa gets tired with so many people on his back." I am curious when we get an explanation about why the lightening doesn't effect her at all. I could have squeed with joy seeing this update. So glad you still aren't dead and updated this. I am really looking forward to more. I hope you will have more for me soon. Loving it.
Comments from author:
I was thinking along similar lines. He could fly them for a while but not too long.
Review By [(Past Donor)FireDragon] • Date [29 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude Two" from ShadeoftheEnd
Review:
Is she an airbender? I mean the whole wind pulling her thing. Although that would probably be an extreme over-kill a this point so her not getting any bending powers makes sense too. *shrug* Meh, guess we'll find out.
Comments from author:
Shh... The first rule of fight club is that we don't talk about fight club.

*Winks*
Review By [ShadeoftheEnd] • Date [25 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude Two" from Morgomir
Review:
Interesting story. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [4 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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