Um...this first chapter is a little jarring. Is this a story where Buffy can just ignore any supernatural attacks if she feels like it, for no real reason given, other than she's the Slayer (a status which has apparently suddenly started granting her magic resistance)? And if so, why bother dodging the fire attacks? If she's immune to bending attacks, why not just stand there and laugh at Azula's attempts to bend at her? Or is it just lightning, and if so, why? This doesn't really make sense.
Comments from author:
I'm sorry you think that. She's not resistant to all attacks. Just certain ones. I can't give too much away without spoilers.
I really like the story so far, especially since Zuko isn't going back to the fire nation. Also, since Katara didn't have to use the spirit water, will they end up using it for something else? Looking forward to your next update.
Thanks for writing :)
Comments from author:
I always thought Zuko betraying Iroh and going back to his daddy was a stupid idea. But that's something I'll have to address, I suppose. It really depends on how big of an impact Buffy had while hanging out with them. In my mind, she was with them for several weeks. Long enough to make several comments on their relationship and perhaps be a tad bit jealous of how close they are. Since really, her own father sucked, and Giles... well, the less said about what happened in canon the better.
Spirit water... :)
Review By [TheTurnCoat] • Date [29 Dec 12] • Not Rated
It's nice to read another part. A bit of advice though: had I not known which part in the Avatar universe this was, I'd be completely lost now. Try to describe things a bit more.
Comments from author:
They just left Ba Sing Se. Only the interludes are out of order chronologically. Plus, I wanted it to be confusing since Buffy has absolutely no clue what's happening over half the time.
I'll try to do better though.
Review By [Valkyrie] • Date [29 Dec 12] • Not Rated
yay awesome update. And I have been thinking, I think Appa could fly with a bear on his back but only for a little while, because in that one episode they have to walk to the airbending temple because "Appa gets tired with so many people on his back." I am curious when we get an explanation about why the lightening doesn't effect her at all. I could have squeed with joy seeing this update. So glad you still aren't dead and updated this. I am really looking forward to more. I hope you will have more for me soon. Loving it.
Comments from author:
I was thinking along similar lines. He could fly them for a while but not too long.
Review By [FireDragon] • Date [29 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Interlude Two" from ShadeoftheEnd
Review:
Is she an airbender? I mean the whole wind pulling her thing. Although that would probably be an extreme over-kill a this point so her not getting any bending powers makes sense too. *shrug* Meh, guess we'll find out.
Comments from author:
Shh... The first rule of fight club is that we don't talk about fight club.
*Winks*
Review By [ShadeoftheEnd] • Date [25 Nov 12] • Not Rated