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Review of chapter "Toil and Trouble" from FireWolfe
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more please
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [1 Mar 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Toil and Trouble" from Crayshack
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Is this dead? I'd really like to see it keep going.
Review By [Crayshack] • Date [31 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Toil and Trouble" from Demonspawn
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Really enjoying this fic!! More soon please!
Review By [Demonspawn] • Date [1 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Toil and Trouble" from leelaa
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(Jean-Claude's POV:) ...he would have a serious discussion with her about attacking neutral parties in the middle of negotiations. It would be a wonder if the entire Council didn't declare war on them on principle alone.
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Love this chapter. Waiting eagerly to find out just what has managed to tamp down Anita's temper so drastically as to disquiet everyone.
Review By [leelaa] • Date [3 Jul 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Toil and Trouble" from mariposa
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Great story. I've never read the Anita Blake series, but this fic has piqued my interest in that universe.
Comments from author:
As it should. The AnitaVerse is an incredibly detailed, interesting place. I'd recommend it. The early novels are the best.

I think, as far as Dawn in the multiverse goes, this is the last in the series that will deal with Anita and friends.
Review By [mariposa] • Date [1 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Toil and Trouble" from Gideon
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Great work! A lot happening in this chapter. The slayers as descendants of the Fey is a great idea and explains Faith a lot better than it does Buffy. Dawn seems to have found the centaurs just in time for her next change, I hope Gawp doesn't miss her too much. I'd be sorry to see Anita go but Damien as a human would be pretty cool. JC in a rage was very scary and Zane's description of Xander was awesome!
Comments from author:
When you think about it, Buffy is pretty atypical of slayers in general. She's bright and happy (at least in the beginning) when her job is dark with a high mortality rate. In my happy little crazy world, Hank being a leprechaun makes so much sense. He had to leave, because Buffy being the Slayer meant she might find out his secret!

And, sorry, but Dawn won't be changing quite yet. Mostly I wanted her to meet them so she could get some information on her new world, and so that when she does inherit hooves she'll not feel so bad. She's seen real centaurs, after all, and maybe she'll figure out how to come back and visit?

As for Anita... gone, but not forgotten... glad you enjoyed it!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [30 Jun 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Toil and Trouble" from (Current Donor)Tempi
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The story has taken an interesting twist with Anita perhaps lost in the multiverse. I look forward to more wacky crossovers when Dawn's giant adventures continues.
Review By [(Current Donor)Tempi] • Date [30 Jun 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Toil and Trouble" from AllenPitt
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Hm.... maybe Anita is pregnant? Meanwhile Dawn and the centaurs, that was funny. Poor Voldy another prophecy he can't interpret. He's as bad as Wesley on that front.
Comments from author:
No, no! Anita can't be pregnant, she's on the Pill, and in the AnitaVerse that apparently has a 100% effectiveness rate... And Voldemort just can't catch a break on the prophecy front. As the centaurs would say, all the magics has scrambled his brains.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [30 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dancing Partners" from leelaa
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...the shifters that were being held didn't seem as upset as they would be if dissection and experimentation were on the agenda. A few were worried about being 'out' but Xander didn't see why being a confirmed GLBT was cause for a panic attack.
It wasn't like they were going to be killed for it, right?
Xander made a mental note to keep Willow and Kennedy far, far away from this dimension.
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LOL. So many things and phrases that have a very different meaning in the ABVH verse. Just reread this whole arc yet again. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Review By [leelaa] • Date [1 Jun 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dancing Partners" from Nummy
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Oh gosh I love your story! I woulda liked it if Dawn had stayed a little longer with Jean Claude, but when she realized she was in Scotland and then gets attacked by giant spiders I immediately thought "yay! Harry Potter!" and so her short visit is forgiven.

excellent writing. More please!
Review By [Nummy] • Date [16 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dancing Partners" from Christanan
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Fabulous chapter. I adore the Xander/Cordy interaction. Poor guy has gone through so much, it'd be interesting to see what could happen between him and Cordy.
Review By [Christanan] • Date [7 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dancing Partners" from Gideon
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Wow, happy times and friendly natives for Dawn and Xander! If you can call being stuck in a jail cell good times.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [1 May 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dancing Partners" from Zephyrdh
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It´s reacting to the Key. Nice =D
Review By [Zephyrdh] • Date [30 Apr 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dancing Partners" from leelaa
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Excellent chapter. :) Especially love the Xander-Cordy interaction.
Review By [leelaa] • Date [30 Apr 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dancing Partners" from angrymonkey
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Great chapter, curious where it goes.
Review By [angrymonkey] • Date [30 Apr 11] • Not Rated
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