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Review of chapter "The Offer" from named
Review:
Lol, I am afraid that all I can give is an echo, its an interesting read. Should be interesting to see where it goes in the future. Maybe u could have him train under the assassins during the summer trip. He could even become a assassin under certain conditions or something. Eg he works on the side for them on the condition that he chooses the contracts he takes and doesn't interfere with the ones that he doesn't take and he keep the order informed as to things like the yearly apocalypse.
Should be interesting to see where u take it.
(Also just finished "He's fast, She's furious", good story, a really enjoyable read so far. Look forward to more.)
Named
Review By [named] • Date [23 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Offer" from Dragonelf
Review:
Nice story and I hope you will get inspired to update it.

::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Apple Fritters::

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Reading is to the mind what exercise is to the body.
- Sir Richard Steele
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [30 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Offer" from Loatroll
Review:
Very interesting like always! :-) Thanks for the read.
Review By [Loatroll] • Date [24 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Offer" from KyrissDraconis
Review:
This is an interesting take on the Tarakan plot line. I like it! More please.
Comments from author:
It was always strange to me that the Tarakan's were never used after that on the show. It seemed like a waste of such a great concept. I do hope to add more in the future.

Thank you for the review.
Review By [KyrissDraconis] • Date [4 Nov 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Offer" from RedlegIggy
Review:
A good start and an interesting premise. Hope you put more chapters up soon.
Comments from author:
Sorry for the late reply.

I'm glad you've liked it so far. Hopefully chapters will be coming before the new year, I've got a few other fics I'm working on currently.

Thank you for the review.
Review By [RedlegIggy] • Date [20 Jun 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Offer" from AlexanderMcpherson
Review:
wait, what... it ends t this bit? aw jeez.

cant wait for more.
Comments from author:
I apologize for the very late reply.

As to your question, I'm hoping to add some chapters to this some time in the future. When that will be, I have no idea though.

Thank you for the review.
Review By [AlexanderMcpherson] • Date [27 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Offer" from eriktheviking
Review:
A well written and entertaining look at the Order.
Comments from author:
I really wanted to show something other then the archetypal assassin, and this was the result. I'm glad to see it's worked out like I'd hoped.

Thank you for the review.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [2 Apr 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Offer" from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank you, I've got the next one underway now.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [2 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Offer" from WolfWriter
Review:
This is a cool story, I really like it.

Those two guys from the Reclamations section are scarier than the assassins! Isn't it always the accountants and clerks who are the most dangerous, because they have access to two things: Background checks and money.

The clerks look people up, accountants look up the finances, then they send out the repo men.

Scary stuff!

I firmly believe that it's not the politicians who will take over the world, it's going to be some nebbish CPA wearing Steve Urkel glasses, has sinus problems and a mind that has more twists to it than the original Labyrinth.
Comments from author:
You've got it, what's scarier then the demonic/supernatural version of accounts payable? Not much. That's what I wanted to show with these guys, they aren't assassins, they're the guys that go after the people vicious enough to have killed a Tarakan.

Having dealt with the kind of people you're talking about on a semi-regular basis, I can honestly say I've had occasion to prefer the visit of an assassin.

Thank you for the review.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [1 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Offer" from Greywizard
Review:
I'm LOVING this! ;-)

Especially Xander's attitude towards Angel and the vampire's wellbeing. ;-)

More, please.
Comments from author:
Angel is not going to enjoy Xander's visit, they obviously hate each other, despite their veiled civility. I don't see Xander being even remotely nice about his next visit at all, just the way we like it.

Thank you for the review.
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [1 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Offer" from mariposa
Review:
LOVE it. I hope you continue.
Comments from author:
I'm planning to put out another chapter next week, around the same time.

Thanks for the review.
Review By [mariposa] • Date [1 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Meet" from BlueEyedJedi
Review:
It will be fun to see how the Order reacts, and who they send to help.
Comments from author:
Yes it will, after writing that one-shot, that was exactly what I wanted to find out.

Thank you for the review.
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [28 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Meet" from (Past Donor)Jewel
Review:
Interesting idea - looking forward to more ;)
Comments from author:
I hope to have another chapter up before the end of the week.

Thank you for the review.
Review By [(Past Donor)Jewel] • Date [28 Mar 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Meet" from Morgomir
Review:
Interesting start. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Thank you, I'm working on future chapters as I write this. Your review is appreciated.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [27 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Meet" from bucksavage
Review:
Not bad! I like the premise so far, let's see where this goes.
Comments from author:
Even double-posts are accepted, thank you.
Review By [bucksavage] • Date [26 Mar 11] • Not Rated
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