Let's be honest, 99% of the stories don't get finished. Your being way to cryptic about things that don't need to be. Like who Xanders girlfriend is.
Great story but was hoping it would be more prison-esque. Like the show OZ. While the sneaking around and mystery are cool i would like to hear more about the action and how Xander becomes a top dog that others learn not to fuck with.
I can guess who the "them" is and i'm hoping for at least one more chapter before you drop the story just to know how Xander deals with Ivy and Harley.
Comments from author:
I understand, I am working on it. Some of the cryptic-ness comes from me not knowing who she is yet. I will try to keep posting on it.
Review By [Downery] • Date [7 Jan 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Poker Game" from BlueEyedJedi
Review:
Merry Christmas, and to all a good life. Prayers for a update are always included.
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [25 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Nice how you twisted Xanders talent of making his friends stronger on his cellmate. Clever reasoning.
And Xanders (bad) luck with crazy woman comes trough again. Wonder how he's going to explain this to Buffy - he might actually be going to need those therapeutic sessions :-P
I'm betting on Magpie, to whom the invitation was extended, and... Marcie Ross. Just envisioning the possibility of her 'invisibility' fluctuating and her getting caught, sentenced, and fitted with a blinking ankle bracelet to keep track of her when her power is active...
SD
Review By [Oakheart] • Date [21 Jul 11] • Not Rated