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Dawn Saxon: The Master's Daughter

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Review of chapter "Dawn Saxon: The Master's Daughter" from MountainKing
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Nice and evil. Still something doesn't sit right with me about this one. The monks, even if they are stupid, would have seen the problem sending something as powerful as the Key to an unstable psychopathic madman like the RTD era Master. Then again...

It would have been interesting to see the Master raising Dawn, showing how he twisted her into the evil Time Lady we see here. Sort of the reverse of how the Doctor's companions are improved by their journeys...

It's a shame this was a one shot, a lot more could be done with the idea. Still good one

Thomas
Review By [MountainKing] • Date [29 Mar 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dawn Saxon: The Master's Daughter" from CPTSkip
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Ah! So nice to see lil' Dawnie playing with her toys. Lol! What is Dawn's Time Lady name? The Mistress? That sounds a bit kinky, doesn't it? I'm not quite sure how you could have a sequel since Dawn destroyed/owns the universe, but what the heck? I'd read a sequel. Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [28 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dawn Saxon: The Master's Daughter" from Gideon
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The Master defeated by the younger generation. I suppose there is some irony in that the one person he trusted ended up betraying him. And taking over the world goes a lot smoother if you get rid of your enemies rather than keeping them around.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [27 Mar 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dawn Saxon: The Master's Daughter" from Valkyrie
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I like that. A little less tell though, and a little more show, would be good. I'm mainly referring to that end paragraph.
Review By [Valkyrie] • Date [27 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dawn Saxon: The Master's Daughter" from Doodle
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Excellent chapter.


Wow, the Monks are really stupid.
Review By [Doodle] • Date [27 Mar 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Dawn Saxon: The Master's Daughter" from VillageOrchid
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Well, you can't get more angsty than the end of the universe!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [27 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dawn Saxon: The Master's Daughter" from glrasshopper
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Damn, I don't know what's scarier; the thought of how this could occur Dawn was send to the Master, or the fact that this feels awfully close to canon Dawn, who always seemed a bit quick with the violence...
Review By [glrasshopper] • Date [27 Mar 11] • Not Rated
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