Review By [Shinkan] • Date [9 Aug 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Rabbit Summoning" from AstarothDevin
Review:
I can't believe someone else has read Raptor Red. This is probably that book's first fanfic.
Awesome story!
Comments from author:
It's one of my favorite books. It's got all the important things: Action, Love, Adventure, Heart Break, Romance, Dinosaurs...
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [AstarothDevin] • Date [6 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Rabbit Summoning" from feynstrom
Review:
Having Duck summons can derail Sasuke from his canon path in very interesting directions. Darkwing Duck, to teach him how to be a proper avenging hero? Though, one misstep and he gets Negaduck too. And then there is Scrooge McDuck. The financial system of the ninja world is pretty much buggered if ever turns up. Flipside though, Donald Duck. Choleric summons for the emotional repressed ninja, that's gonna end badly. Hilariously badly.
Comments from author:
The vast range of ducks in fiction that could be brought in could truly send him into a crazed state. I won't be doing a sequel, but there is potential for more with this.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Review By [feynstrom] • Date [17 Mar 12] • Not Rated
I missed this story the first time it was posted, not sure how as I try to keep an eye out for your stuff.
This NEEDS a sequel. It is VERY funny.
Comments from author:
Thanks for keeping an eye on my stuff. You can always track me as an author, which would send updates everytime I post, be it new or old. I do that with several authors.
I'm glad you like it, but I'm not sure how I would continue it. It IS rather silly after all.
Review of chapter "Rabbit Summoning" from texaswookie
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No mouse/rat contract? With the way it was going I was really expecting Mickey, Splinter, Mighty Mouse, and Speedy Gonzales, or some one like them to show up near the end. Oh well, its still a great read.
Comments from author:
I thought about it, but I couldn't really think of who it would fit personality wise, except for Hinata, but she was already getting Theropods. It was a good idea, though.
Thanks for reading!
Review By [texaswookie] • Date [4 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Rabbit's honoriffic is Brer (meaning 'brother'), not Briar.
Comments from author:
Whoops, well, I always assumed it was from briar, as in prickers like raspberries or blackberries. But yeah, after a slight bit of research, yup, you're right.
Thanks for reading!
Review By [Fregith] • Date [31 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Rabbit Summoning" from eriktheviking
Review:
A great fun story but I do hope to see the idea expanded as it was so good.
Comments from author:
Maybe, but probably not. I'm just now catching up on some of my old stories that are nearly finished. All I need to to is finish them up and that opens wide the timeslots.
Thanks for reading!
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [30 Mar 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Rabbit Summoning" from borgrabbit
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Irrational haiku:
Crazy summon Reality a mirage Comfort the squeamish
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Great one-shot!!!
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [30 Mar 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Rabbit Summoning" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
This was inspired lunacy.
Thank you.
Kelp--Just as well no one got whales, they'd be moaning about Arthur Dent as they crashed down on enemies!
Comments from author:
Well, either that or they'd just take off after eating all the fish with only so much as a "So long and thanks for all the Fish!" Dolphins might have a slightly different porpoise, but the whale remains the same. I was trying for another pun with that last sentence, but only manage one.
Thanks for reading!
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [29 Mar 11] • Not Rated
awesome work... Though I was surprised that Rockie from the Rockie and Bullwinkle show did not make an appearance. I wonder if Naruto would get a Cabbit if he summoned using multiple tails of the Kyuubi's chakra.
Comments from author:
No, no cabbits. Spaceships and hyperactive kids should never mix, never ever mix.
Rocky was a possibility, but it wasn't about Ino's summons. Maybe it would have worked, especially if she had summoned him as a kamikaze pilot. ooo the possibilities.
Thanks for reading!
Review By [Bobboky] • Date [28 Mar 11] • Not Rated