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Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from DieselDriver
Review:
Which leads to the possibility of another version of Buffy & faith as adopted kids (instead of just Buffy) who end up in star gate or the Air Force Academy. Imagine the havoc they could be the center of...
Comments from author:
I've been trying to write part two of this story for ages so who knows how it'll end.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [20 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DieselDriver
Review:
"Lights flashed by her head as if she was on some interstellar rollercoaster. Finally a bright light appeared in front of her and got closer and closer until…"

Way to go with the cliff hanger...
Comments from author:
Thank-you.

D.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [20 Jan 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from Starfox
Review:
Another story of yours that had me laughing out loud at the antics of the pint-sized slayer duo.
Comments from author:
Thank-you, I particularly enjoyed that story myself...I keep meaning to write a sequel to it but never seem to manage.

One day maybe.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [Starfox] • Date [8 Feb 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from bookworm
Review:
If the various things ever get out of the way, I'd be interested in that sequel too. Don't think I've ever seen this particular method of crossing the universes.
Comments from author:
Thank-you. I started to write a 'sort-of' sequel (same characters, slightly different universe) but I found I was making it overly complex and generally not very good so it got shelved again. It IS something I want to do and I will get back to it...sometime...soon...promise!

Cheers,
D.
Review By [bookworm] • Date [24 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from bradsan
Review:
I really love this story. read it more than once.
I also read the reviews and saw the writing about the age of Buffy and Faith. who is older and who is younger.

Buffy is born 19 January 1981 and called at fifteen in 1996.
Faith is born 14 December 1980 and called at seventeen on 12 may 1998.

Faith is calling Buffy her older sister because she is longer active and experience than Faith. So as in slayer-years Buffy is older in human-years Buffy is one year younger.

In many story they write that Faith is younger than Buffy but she is older as you can see. Sorry couldn't resist.
Comments from author:
Very much how I've always read it as Faith being a little older, normally I'm very careful not to say anything more than Faih being born in 1980.

Glad you liked the story.

This one had many false starts and I think it changed plot a couple of times while I was writing it.

I keep thinking of writing a sequel to this story (Buffy/Faith a year or so down the way). Going to school and so on.

Unfortunately things keep stopping be from doing much about it...you never know one day maybe.

Cheers,
D.
Review By [bradsan] • Date [30 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from maxthehobbit
Review:
How did I miss this when I was reading this series, but I found it by accident and I'm glad I did. I liked how Jack realized just how good Hammond was as a Commander and how much crap he had to deal with, especially from Jack. Faith and Buffy as little girls and still having at least some slayer traits made me laugh, mostly as I pictured them having a "Dawn-like' personality and getting into a lot of mischief. Good ending, it left an opening for the mini's to have more adventures if you decide to write more about them.
Thanks for another great story.
Comments from author:
Yep finding yourself as 'Boss' is a mega eye-openner!

I enjoyed writing this it was a nice change and I really do want to write a sequel to it but I don't seem to have the time! Maybe one day eh?

Cheers,
D.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [4 Feb 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)DreamSmith
Review:
I liked this a LOT!
Very, very nice.
(But hey, no Mini!Jack??? Not even a mention of Jack's very own little young-ified doppleganger? That seems like a genuine oversight. And just think of the storylines they could have off at school together)

Despite that, kudos and well-done.
I loves me a nice SG/Buffy crossover, and Mini!Faith and Mini!Buffy are always awesome when done properly.
Comments from author:
Thank-you.

I have to admit that Mini-Jack slipped my mind at the time of writing.

You might be interested to know that I intend to write a sequel to this fic set about six months later with Mini-Faith and Mini-Buffy at Junior High. Now you've mentioned Mini-Jack I might try to work him into the story, but I'm making no promises as Mini-Jack probably isn't that 'Mini' any more. He is possibly at College at the time of the projected story.

Anyway we'll see. I've no idea when this fic will be written and posted but I have wanted to do it for some time so it probably will be written.

Cheers.
D.
Review By [(Current Donor)DreamSmith] • Date [3 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from kangel
Review:
This deserves another story. Perhaps the trials of kid Faith and Buffy lving with Jack?
Comments from author:
Thank-you, I am in fact playing with a few ideas and hope to have something out in the next few months.

Dave.
Review By [kangel] • Date [5 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from Ltlconf
Review:
Howdy,

Funnier than hell. I loved Faith surprising Buffy with her expanded vocab and diggin' it in by draggin' out the story of the previous night's fin an' games. Ya had the Stargate thing spot on as well. Ya really need ta write more Stargate stuff, ya got the knack for the characters: I loved Jack wanderin' mind as Sam tried ta explain it all. We don't get what she knows 'cause he don't. Not only funny but first class dodge I enjoyed!
Oh, and how does a system lord kill with lettuce (and do I want ta know)? Hah! That was hilarious!

I'll stick with the opinion that Faith is younger than Buffy (Ta heck with Joss dodgin' on background by half-approvin' GAM, he shoulda hired an actress that didn't look younger than the rest!) but that was my only quibble. 'Sides, Faith WOULD look older than Buff at that age anyhow!
I DID enjoy her bein' considered saner and stable than Buffy ('cept for the screwing with the boy's mind by flirtin' with 'em) and generally handlin' things better ("...Buffy-hell" heheheh!). Also loved the dig on Buffy always goin' after older men and gettin' hot after Daniel and commentin' on how her flirtin' with ANY guy was a bit 'unnatural.'

AW, HELL with the monkey and the witch, this is the funniest thing you've written for this series and rivals the Conan stuff ( and I LOVE that!).

Serious, you do Stargate well, do some more...hell do sequals for this!
Comments from author:
The Jack's wandering mind was because I couldn't do the Sam, techno-babble! So, I thought why not do it from Jack's POV, he won't understand it either!

The Faith/Buffy age thing. I've always been of the opinion that Faith is about one year older than Buffy. I think people read too much into the 'Big Sister' comment, I think Faith was referring to Buffy being a slayer for longer. However you can make good arguements for her being younger too!

Best to go with what you feel more comfortable with I say.

Did I mention I did have a sequel planned? Don't know when it'll be written though.

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [Ltlconf] • Date [21 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Nice. Good teamwork. Buffy and Faith should be growing up better adjusted. I'm glad there's enough Slayer to go around and the Ancient device didn't have to halve the 'amount' of Slayer in the originals to make the clones ;)
Comments from author:
Well they did loose something, because they're shorter than they were before, but I'm sure Mini-Buffy/Faith will be back to their old slves as they grow up (again). Or course the original Faith and Buffy were just scanned so nothing was taken from them.

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [9 Apr 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from AllenPitt
Review:
sequel! I want to see them go on a mission with Vala. heh. Can you imagine Faith and Vala on the same mission? Not to mention maybe a records search finds a Summers family & a big sister Buffy.... or Faith finds her dad. Or something.
Comments from author:
I've started on a sequel but it'll be some time before it comes out.

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [7 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from TheatricalBarrister
Review:
I enjoyed this quite a bit. Any chance the mini-slayers will get any further stories?
Comments from author:
Mini Buffy/Faith will ride again! This time in a SG1/mystery xover. I can hardly wait to see what they get up to!

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [TheatricalBarrister] • Date [7 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from PATM
Review:
I guess the story had to resolve at some point, sad to see it end. Thanks for a great reading experience.
Comments from author:
My pleasure, it was fun to write.
Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [PATM] • Date [7 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from Gideon
Review:
All's well that ends well. I wouldn't be suprised if big Buffy would be jealous of her mini counterpart being able to start a new life and not have to live in such a dismal and depressing place. Of course she doesn't know anything about it and what she doesn't know won't be missed. I also wonder if mini B&F will one day find their way home. Who knows what Carter will come up with given time? That would be a suprise to the home team!
Comments from author:
Thank-you. An interesting thought there, but if the go to the 'Grim-verse' they wouldn't be able to say long because of that pesky 'degeneration' thing.

Cheers,
Dave.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [7 Apr 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Six." from (Current Donor)Tempi
Review:
Great story. Once you've finished all your ideas for the Grim Up North series, you should return to the SGC-verse and do some further crossovers between BtVS/Stargate/Call of Cthulhu. I look forward to your next story.
Comments from author:
All the 'Grim' stories are actually written they're just waiting to be posted. This has allowed me to write other stuff like spin offs.

Next 'Grim' story is 'Severance' in a week or twos time.

Cheers.
Dave.
Review By [(Current Donor)Tempi] • Date [7 Apr 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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