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Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Two" from Ltlconf
Review:
Howdy!

"Perceptive."
The fact you had Faith use such a word correctly in terms of definition and in means of of the its use in sarcasm is one reason I love this story. While about Willow, you don't ignore others and ignore fanon in favor of canon.
Same applies to your portrayal of the Mayor: While certifiably insane and evil, he does genuinely try to avoid inflicting unnecessary pain and cares for those who work for him. You show this repeatedly yet never drift into revisionism one way or the other. Nope, Wilkins is indeed 100% evil...just not rude about it.

And poor Buffy. You show her this chapter finally crawling out her PTSD-induced navel-gazing and make her genuinely sympathetic, sad, and even tragic. No mean feat considering how the others (and the readers by default) have seen her up to now! That took skill.
Good touch with Buffy's musings over Giles and his relationship with magic and thus Willow. True she's a bit off in her conclusions, but they're logical ones and show that Buffy's back in the game psychologically. She's THINKING again, and Buffy was always most effective when tried to think things through rationally and bounced ideas off others. Good to see this starting up again.

Yeup, this story is worth the wait for each chapter and only gets ever more complex.


The Cracker!
Review By [Ltlconf] • Date [3 Dec 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from raxadian
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Yeah, your daughter. Talk about being married to his job, uh?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [28 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from raxadian
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Again, Oh, I love this!
Review By [raxadian] • Date [27 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eight" from raxadian
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I guess she has more than enough Willows then?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [27 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from raxadian
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Ah, he has no clue, doesn't he?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [27 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Six" from raxadian
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Faith and Willow, Brawl and Brains, yeah, why not?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [27 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Five" from raxadian
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Ah well, is not fair to blame Buffy of everything, but still want to think that's better if W leaves the Hellmouth.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [27 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Four" from raxadian
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I am loving this so far
Review By [raxadian] • Date [27 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from raxadian
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Oh, so will Faith and Willow end dating?
Review By [raxadian] • Date [27 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from raxadian
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I approve of Willow going away of Sunnydale, the place is bad mojo.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [27 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from raxadian
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Well yeah, after the Mayor, Willow magic... it was mostly used for dark things.
Review By [raxadian] • Date [27 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-Two" from Harry
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Sounds like the Mayor is playing games with Willow and many others. And it is causing many to wonder if taking him on is the right thing. Time for Red to do her part to help out, for this creature not only is threatening her, but her FAMILY as well!
Review By [Harry] • Date [27 Oct 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One" from tamfoss
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This story is amazing. I hope you will continue soon. I love Willow real family stories. This one is not only interesting but thought out with her in mind. Keep it up you a fan in this reader.
Review By [tamfoss] • Date [6 Oct 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Thirty-One" from (Current Donor)hols
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I really enjoy reading this story so I am really glad you updated I think it's sweet and a little creepy that the mayor cares about Willow.I liked the conversation between Xander and Faith at the end of the chapter
Review By [(Current Donor)hols] • Date [17 Jul 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from Wise
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Considering the way he broke the news to Willow, it's really difficult to feel any sympathy for Ira at all. His choice of words was crucial. If he had said, "I'm not your biological father," this might have played out very differently, but he didn't. He said, "I'm not your real father." In that moment and with those words, and with his failure to immediately correct himself, he gave up any claim to the love of the girl, who, by his own words, isn't his real daughter.
Review By [Wise] • Date [9 Jul 14] • Not Rated
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