This story is very well written. I like that it is obvious that you've had it plotted out since the beginning, which is unfortunately something missing from most fan fiction.
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Six" from tchizek
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Interesting chapter!
Review By [tchizek] • Date [22 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Six" from Ltlconf
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Howdy!
Nicely done. And loved the conversation between Ducky and Gibbs. Very "them". Also his mother noting how indeed the human capacity and means to kill had indeed improved mightily since the days of swords and spears! Always wondered what sticking a bundle of dynamite down the Snake-Mayor's throat woulda done. Or simply remembering that second AT4 (left over from dealing with the Judge) Xander had stashed! Less messy that blowing up the entire school, if not as fun for all concerned. Fire, however, would be excellent for dealing with the vampire army. WP grenades, Molotov cocktails, napalm, flame throwers, and foo-gas barrels tied to tripwires...all would be excellent and keep down human casualties. Maybe do away with them altogether.
And didn't find the magic at all outa place. Of COURSE Willow has over half a decade more experience and knowledge, stands to reason. Also liked how Willow interpreted the Mayor's orders concerning Worth. All he said was "gone" not how. Smart!
The Cracker!
Review By [Ltlconf] • Date [22 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Six" from MistofRainbows
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Sounds like a bit of hacking might be required... or calling Giles... or hmm... maybe she's got blackmail material from college... :)
Review By [MistofRainbows] • Date [21 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Five" from tchizek
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I love that last line, classic Ducky!
Review By [tchizek] • Date [21 May 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
I really enjoy this story it has become one of my favourite story you are a great writer and I really like the way have you manged to incorporate NCIS with BTVS and I really like they way you write Willow Faith and Gibbs this is defiantly going to be one of those story's I will read again and again
Review By [hols] • Date [18 Mar 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Five" from MMWillow
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oh my Ducky and Gibbs reading watcher journals could be entertaining
Review By [MMWillow] • Date [9 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Five" from jebbypal
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Ahahaha. Those last 5 paragraphs were perfect!!! I can just see mama mallard sucking her dogs on those 2 naughty boys. Great chapter
Review By [jebbypal] • Date [9 Feb 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Five" from crackllama
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LOLOL....offically my favorite Buffy/NCIS crossover ever....what a great scene to end a chapter on!
Review By [crackllama] • Date [8 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Five" from Sulien
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"“Get in trouble for going through Mother’s Watcher journals.”"
My initial reaction to that was to immediately think "Oh, dear..." then literally laugh out loud. Thanks, I needed that! Thanks also for the update and I'm very much looking forward to the next bit.
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Five" from Shanna
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I love it! Mamma Mallard was a watcher. Ducky's adorable. I love the last line in this chapter. I hope they're able to find something to help out the gang.
Thanks for writing. I do so enjoy a good Willow story. Take care.
tchizek
Sulien
