Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
KaerieReview:
Interestingly dark..and a good start to something that could be a good adventure. All of the jumping between past and present tenses was rather distracting, though.
Comments from author:
Sorry Kaerie, I should have been more aware when I did my final proof read. :D That's what I get for writting a story at 1 am. Glad you liked it though, messed up tenses aside.
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Kaerie] • Date [30 Mar 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
GideonReview:
Nice little story, even if it is not fluffy in any way :( I choose to believe that SG1 can help her, maybe with a bit of help from her old friends - any chance you will write that?
Comments from author:
Thanks, it is a little darker then I normally write. I especially thought that my first re-entry into fanfic would be much lighter, but this is what came.
If I do continue on, and I'm not sure if I will at this point, things would not stay so bleek for Tara. That I can promise.
Review By [
Gideon] • Date [30 Mar 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from
CPTSkipReview:
Oooooo! You were so nasty to poor Tara! Will there be more to this story where Tara gets to kick some Snake butts? Lol!
Comments from author:
I'm not sure if the story will continue, at least not at this point. But if it did, definately she would kick snake butt.
Review By [
CPTSkip] • Date [30 Mar 11] • Not Rated
