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Review of chapter "Chapter 11: Wonderland." from AstralXion
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Plz uppdaterad tvist story i realy love it
Review By [AstralXion] • Date [1 Feb 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11: Wonderland." from rhiowen
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Rrrr arg update! please :(?
Review By [rhiowen] • Date [22 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11: Wonderland." from Vickzie
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Omg that was such bad timing! Cool story though
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [22 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11: Wonderland." from MarcusSLazarus
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The reasoning behind HOW Buffy ended up dressed as Alice was a bit tenuous- you could have just made it that “Twilight” was already published or something like that; it’s not like “Buffy”’s timeline has ever been THAT dependent on things happening in particular years-, but otherwise you’ve definitely got an interesting story here.

While a part of me wishes that Alice had been given more of an opportunity to ‘let rip’ on Spike’s forces while she was still in control- she might depend on her visions in a fight, but she’s still strong enough so that she’d hardly be useless without them-, I can’t fault her interaction with Angel and the others, ranging from ‘Soldier-Xander’s’ incredulity to her own ‘connection’ with Angel due to his pre-existing relationship with Buffy.

Buffy’s subsequent attempts to deal with Alice’s powers and thirst came across very well, as you neatly explore her new capabilities while still coming up with SOME ways for Buffy to be hurt despite Alice’s greater strength compared to most of Buffy’s current opponents, along with such touching little moments as her spending Christmas with Angel and Dawn (Even if it was interrupted by demon infiltration, that scene with the Powers suggests that there’s a LOT more going on in their relationship than the obvious).

Plus, of course, the confrontation with Kendra and the consequences of it should DEFINITELY be interesting to see in the long term (Just so long as this changes the circumstances of Kendra’s ORIGINAL death; the possibilities of the scenario you’ve created are just too promising to pass up).

Just a suggestion, but maybe after Angel loses his soul Buffy could use Alice’s gift to determine a way of modifying the curse so that his soul’s permanent (You know, since she can see the future based on decisions she might be able to ‘see’ what changes would result in Angel retaining his soul for good, or something like that)?

Well, keep up the good work; can’t wait for more!
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [12 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11: Wonderland." from JediKnight
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Very interesting job on the chapters, I hope you'll post more soon.

-Any chance of the "Twilight" characters coming through a portal at the end of season 5?
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [20 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11: Wonderland." from DesitaniaF
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Hmm... wonder who Sarah is and who her husband is
Review By [DesitaniaF] • Date [7 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11: Wonderland." from Gideon
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ok, I admit it. Buffy killing Santa was a great way to end the story. I just hope Dawn will eventually be able to forgice her!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [16 May 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 11: Wonderland." from cloudleonsgurl
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"Buffy killed Santa!" Loved it.
Review By [cloudleonsgurl] • Date [1 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11: Wonderland." from borgrabbit
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Jingle bells
Santa smells
Rudolph ran away...

Great chapter!
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [26 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11: Wonderland." from MarcusSLazarus
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Well, at least the presence of those 'higher powers' suggests that things might not go as badly as they did originally- sounds like they like the idea of Buffy and Angel staying together, after all-, but I guess we'll just have to wait and see...

Still, at least they had a good Christmas before everything goes to hell with Angelus's return.
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [26 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 11: Wonderland." from TheStonerGuru
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Each new chapter keeps getting better than the last, and it's been great from the start. Keep up the excellent work.
Review By [TheStonerGuru] • Date [26 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: Kendra's mind, Angel's life and Buff.." from deathgeonous
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A nice new chapter, and I totally approve of the new chapter length. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [19 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: Kendra's mind, Angel's life and Buff.." from borgrabbit
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Chapter 10 haiku:

Play the mating game
Spring twilight sings painfully sharp
No longer a game

Great chapter!
Review By [borgrabbit] • Date [19 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: Kendra's mind, Angel's life and Buff.." from Plato
Review:
So does that mean Faith has been called since Buffy technically killed Kendra for a minute?
Comments from author:
Yes, that is what it meant. I haven't decided if I am gonna kill Kendra off when Dru slits her throat or if I'm gonna have Buffy turn her. But that's not for a while anyways.
Review By [Plato] • Date [19 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10: Kendra's mind, Angel's life and Buff.." from cloudleonsgurl
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I actually like how Kendra sympathizing with Buffy. It's realistic and true to I think Kendra's nature. Very good and I love it.
Review By [cloudleonsgurl] • Date [19 Apr 11] • Not Rated
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