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Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Chosen" from bradsan

Review:

love to read more. don't wait to long please.

Review By [bradsan] • Date [29 Jan 12] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Chosen" from Vickzie

Review:

Interesting story! Is Buffy/Emily supposed to be Kristy's character (wihtout the Evil) in regards to Charmed canon? Hope you update more soon

Review By [Vickzie] • Date [11 Oct 11] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Chosen" from Blackett

Review:

Interesting start.

Review By [Blackett] • Date [8 May 11] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Chosen" from yuiop

Review:

Nice

Review By [yuiop] • Date [6 May 11] • Not Rated

Review of chapter "Demon Hunting" from cjsplace

Review:

I think you have an interesting premise, but you're in desperate need of a beta. The numerous grammatic errors make it hard not to jolt the reader out of the story. I wish you luck in your endeavors.

Comments from author:

Thanks for the pointer. I'll try to work harder on editing in the future but maybe i'll add it to the beta section.

Review By [cjsplace] • Date [11 Apr 11] • Not Rated

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