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Review of chapter "Ahoy the city!" from loretta
Review:
this is a good story, i cant wait to see what will happen next
Comments from author:
I have some ideas, but the muse isn't cooperating with actually writing anything down yet. That and real life is kinda hectic at the moment. *rueful chuckle*
Review By [loretta] • Date [2 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ahoy the city!" from IcemanII
Review:
I just found this story, great story so far. Its a lot of fun. I liked the reunion, the Marines' desire to keep Xander's daughter was cool but Marines and Slayers are like ham and cheese, they just go together. And I take it that Xander and John are Sparrows. It looks really promising and fun.Keep up the good work, hope to see more!
Comments from author:
Well thank you for the nice review! I'll try to do more when my work schedule and the muse allows. :)
Review By [IcemanII] • Date [15 Sep 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ahoy the city!" from Morgomir
Review:
Interesting story. Keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
I'll try, another one is in my head already, at least in part. Now if I can just get it down on paper...
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [29 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ahoy the city!" from (Past Donor)severuswinchester
Review:
A treat to read. I liked the reunion, the Marines' desire to keep Xander's daughter was sweet as well. Good writing.
Comments from author:
Thanks a bunch for that awesome review. You made my day! *vbg*
Review By [(Past Donor)severuswinchester] • Date [27 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Ahoy the city!" from serenityselena
Review:
oh my....
surprise, surprise....
Comments from author:
*snicker* Ain't it though? ;)
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [18 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ahoy the city!" from WolfWriter
Review:
Please let it be Will Turner.

This was pretty cool!
Comments from author:
LOL Of course it was! *vbg* Thanks for reviewing. :)
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [18 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ahoy the city!" from spacey
Review:
What now?
Comments from author:
Was it really that confusing? Hm, maybe I should delete it and try something different...
Review By [spacey] • Date [18 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Ahoy the city!" from msdarque
Review:
Okay, surprising and very fun!
Absolutely loved it, congrats! :D
Comments from author:
Thanks for such a hearty review, I really appreciate it. *blushing now*
Review By [msdarque] • Date [18 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Well THAT'S new!" from Blackett
Review:
Really liking this. Hope there will be more soonish.
Comments from author:
Well I posted another, hope to do it again soon. Just need to get it down on paper...
Review By [Blackett] • Date [30 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Well THAT'S new!" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
This more along the lines of a story than snippets of random things. I'd suggest finding a good title for it and removing the Xander centered claim.
Comments from author:
Yeah, I've been thinking about that lately too and trying to come up with a title. Originally I was gonna post actual snippets of things here, but then this just kept going. *rolling my eyes at myself now* I'll try to get to that later tonight when I get off of work, or tomorrow night if I can't tonight.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [12 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "What happens next" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
With green glowy thing I thought it was Dawn at first.
Comments from author:
*chuckle* Which is why I described her immediately after, so people would quickly be disillusioned of that notion. *g*

Thanks for the review. :)
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [12 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Well THAT'S new!" from msdarque
Review:
Surprising, exciting, fun... liked it a lot! :D
Congrats!
Comments from author:
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it and I will try very hard to bring back the girl's parents soon. *g*
Review By [msdarque] • Date [12 Jun 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Well THAT'S new!" from spacey
Review:
im adding this to my tracked stories on the off chance that the 'complete' is false
Comments from author:
LOL It is, I need to change that. Been lazy, I guess.

Thank you and I'll post more when I can. :)
Review By [spacey] • Date [12 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Well THAT'S new!" from Scorpio
Review:
Very nice. I like that her slayer sense can pick up the wraith. I wonder how she would sense other alien lifeforms such as the gou'uld or the asgard. When Xander comes back for her, the IOA might not want to let her go.
Comments from author:
He he he They won't have a choice in the matter. As we all know, nobody messes with Xander's girls. *vbg*
Review By [Scorpio] • Date [12 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Well THAT'S new!" from Greywizard
Review:
!LOVED! Lorne's last comment!!!! ;-)

Lots of fun here, Duchess!

Thanks for sharing. ;-)
Comments from author:
As I said, that entire last exchange is to Tjin's credit, not mine. It was so funny and I'm glad he gave it to me.

Glad you liked it and you're welcome. Thanks for the review! :)
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [11 Jun 11] • Not Rated
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