Review of chapter "The Next Chapter - Part 2 (Harry Potter)" from Piterio
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I really love this, mostly Sekirei and Dragon Age(they just so heart throbbing and adorable). I really hope you continue some of them(i really wonder how Miya react to Xander world). What can i say i love this fic and it would be great to see what happens next.
Review By [Piterio] • Date [23 Nov 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "I Come in Peace... (Mass Effect 2)" from deamon
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Ok I love this. maybe we can see a one shot sequel that deals with them together through ME3 and helping rescue oriana?
Review of chapter "The Next Chapter - Part 2 (Harry Potter)" from dogbertcarroll
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Trying to make excuses for the bigots just doesn't work for me.
Review By [dogbertcarroll] • Date [24 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Next Chapter - Part 2 (Harry Potter)" from deamon
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ok love these shorts. I would love to see the xander/uzume from sekirei and the xander/petunia from harry potter as full stories. and maybe the xander/morrigan from dragon age too (mainly cuz i recently started playing it again lol. tho i still like the leliana or isabella from DA2 better)
Review of chapter "The Next Chapter - Part 2 (Harry Potter)" from deamon
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Ok I love your one shots. Specially the sekirei and harry potter ones. I would like to request/beg for maybe a mass effect xander/tali one plz? tali is my fav fem char in mass effect. (and maybe a samara one too lol)
Review of chapter "Angry Women and Love Bites (Rosario+Vampire)" from eternalfox
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Xander should be Moka's father because, I sincerely doubt that Gyokuro was ever a kind soul. She turned her oldest daughter into an unrelenting killing machine that's unleashed with a trigger. She manipulated her step-daughter Akua into becoming an assassin for her. She's sacrificing her other step-daughter Moka in order to resurrect the most destructive, evil vampire in all existence. Kokoa, she basically ignores her and, of course, Kokoa doesn't agree with what she's attempting to do because awakening Alucard would take away Moka, whom she loves more than her absent mother. Based on all that, yeah, Akasha seems more like that type of woman that Xander would get involved with. It could be that Akasha was only wed to Issha in order to avoid a scandal because she was pregnant by a human.
Review By [eternalfox] • Date [1 Jul 12] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Next Chapter - Part 2 (Harry Potter)" from kenja
Review of chapter "The Next Chapter - Part 2 (Harry Potter)" from eriktheviking
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A cracking good view of what happened to some of the canon characters, with a great teaser of things to come.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [9 Jun 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Marriage Made In... Ah Crap!!! (Harry Potter)" from ScottWanderer
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This has so much potential for fun. Even keeping Bella insane she might transfer her somewhat sychophantic behavior to her new husband. You don't have to be sane to fight on the side good.
*Despite her insanity Bella hunting evil demons "I have no desire to be a slave nor will I allow my Hubby to be one either." *Bella actually liking Joyce but despising Buffy "Even the Potter brat takes his supposed Destiny better than you." *Bella taking offense with how Anthony and Jessica treat their son. Only becuase she doesn't wish to return to Azkaban she might leave them alive. *Half the demons in town fleeing in utter terror becuase of Belladonna's reputation. *Faith and Bella becoming fast friends as they both have a love of violence, plus Magical World Marriages do allow for multiple spouses. *Bella telling off Buffy and Willow for keeping her Husband "fray adjacent" if only becuase that would mean she couldn't hunt demons either.
Review By [ScottWanderer] • Date [9 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Next Chapter - Part 2 (Harry Potter)" from Orchamus
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Rather amusing, as it would be to see Draco's reaction too.
Review By [Orchamus] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Next Chapter - Part 2 (Harry Potter)" from Dhampyr
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It's nice to see a snippet where Draco is not only acting human, but is doing the best he can with the situation at large. And I would really like to see Draco and his family meeting the full Harris clan. It should prove interesting. Although one must wonder if Draco, who still would have had some political connections given that he kept his family out of jail in canon, might not be in the know about the Council and recognize Xander's name when he hears it?
Review of chapter "The Next Chapter (Harry Potter)" from deamon
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Ok I love your one shots but I would love to see some with xander/lily evans and some xander/ginny weasley. (as you can see i love redheads lol. So maybe a xander/susan bones too lol)
Review of chapter "The Next Chapter (Harry Potter)" from eriktheviking
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A cracking good introduction for a crossover in the epilogue period.
Review By [eriktheviking] • Date [1 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Next Chapter (Harry Potter)" from WolfWriter
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Pug faced Pansy????
She really grew out of her looks, didn't she?
Just who the heck did she marry, anyway? He doesn't seem familiar.
Comments from author:
Um... You know, tall, well built, plaid shirt, a heavy scar under his eye instead of it being gouged out (You know because his then girlfreind stopped Caleb from putting his thumb into another man's face... At least that's what'll happen if I continue this one.)? His son's big line being 'This is my boomstick!'... I really can't make it too much clearer without giving it away sorry ^^!
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [1 May 12] • Not Rated