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Harry Potter and the Mouth of Hell

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Review of chapter "Epilogue" from (Past Donor)zephyrRS
Review:
I'm lookin forward to part 2!
Review By [(Past Donor)zephyrRS] • Date [25 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from (Current Donor)Listener
Review:
This story was really great. I think it would've benefitted from a beta to catch small issues, such as "vitaserum" instead of "Veritaserum", but I can ignore that.

I particularly liked the misdirection you had throughout -- were they looking for Buffy or Willow? -- and then, the way you wrote it, we all totally forgot that Faith was around until she showed up. I like that you made Ron more mature as well.

I think you took a bit too long getting from the beginning of the story to the Sunnydale bits, especially since this was only 20 chapters, but when I saw that this was only Part One, I guess I understood that. Of course, I wasn't really expecting it to be Part One of... I'm guessing Three... so that was a bit disappointing, but it's okay in the long run.

Overall, I definitely enjoyed this story and can't wait for Part Two.
Review By [(Current Donor)Listener] • Date [23 Sep 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Inoeth
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Fantastic. I really look forward to part 2! I assume you'll be splitting chapters between The Golden Trio (plus Faith) and the Scoobies back in California? In any case, great job and post the next story soon!
Review By [Inoeth] • Date [21 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from Morgomir
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Great ending. Keep up the good work. and hopefully till next time.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [20 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from ChaosLady
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Please say there is going to be a sequel! You know where Faith helps Harry defeat Voldemort and I really want to see the Order's reaction to Faith.
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [20 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Epilogue" from MarcusSLazarus
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I still think Ginny's the better candidate for a long-term relationship with Harry- Faith's good in the short-term, but Ginny has a better understanding of him after the diary incident in particular-, but that's not to say I'm not looking forward to seeing how this series progresses; keep up the fascinating work!
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [20 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 18" from Morgomir
Review:
Sorry for the late review (exams). Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [17 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 18" from ChaosLady
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Wow. Alot happened in such a short span of time. Great chapter! Update soon!
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [21 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 17" from BritneyandJacob
Review:
Excellent chapters 1-17. I love them. Please continue. I look forward to more soon.
Review By [BritneyandJacob] • Date [7 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 17" from Morgomir
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Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [6 May 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 17" from AllenPitt
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HP & company are a bit annoying with the anti-Angel 'rude, but it's entirely understandable. One slight irony is, they at this point completely hate & despise Snape & are in for a real shock when the truth comes out in that area...
Is Drusilla really a witch? Doesn't match the flashbacks... then again I suppose it'd be even weirder to have it turn out that's a polyjuiced Bella....
She's so crazy, it's easy to forget just how dangerous she is. She killed a slayer and made it look easy. Even Spike couldn't do that.
Meanwhile the Mayor. And no Anya to give them info on what an Ascension his, and so on. This is a great story--I hope Faith decides to go with the witchy crew when they leave Sunnydale.
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [26 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 17" from (Past Donor)Skyefather
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I seem too remember some thing about harry saying something like "When have any of our plans ever worked out? We plan, we prepare, we get there and all hell breaks lose.
Review By [(Past Donor)Skyefather] • Date [25 Apr 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 17" from ChaosLady
Review:
What does Harry have up his sleave now? Great update!
Review By [ChaosLady] • Date [24 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from Morgomir
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Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [4 Apr 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 16" from CrystalBlaze
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Bella has been sicked on the rest of the Scoobies, I take it..
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [27 Mar 12] • Not Rated
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