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Drunkard's Walk XIII: Glory Hound

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Review of chapter "Prologue and Chapter One" from dialNforNinja
Review:
Super, as usual, Bob - definitely in the top percentile of fanfiction.. I don't have any major things to point out, but there was a bit of phrasing near the end that felt a little off to me, while Doug is talking about his collecting tools of mayhem since discovering that he wasn't seeing the IC results of XP gain - "and after I'd gathered" seems like it should be "and since then I'd gathered." Otherwise, like all your other regulars, I'll be eagerly awaiting further progress.

- dNN
Review By [dialNforNinja] • Date [14 Aug 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue and Chapter One" from vitruvian
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I've been following Drunkard's Walk on Bob's site for years now, and eagerly awaiting the release of the Buffy Step for about as long. And it was worth the wait.

Now I'll just be waiting for updates....
Review By [vitruvian] • Date [11 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue and Chapter One" from Disruptor
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[Quite honestly, it was an overwhelmingly safe bet. Of all the worlds I'd found myself in, only a few had not been some version of Earth — and of those all but one had been other planets which were part of civilizations that had at least known of Earth]

I can think of two off the top of my head. Slayers(Though Lina Inverse might know it as the Black World{Darkstar's domain}) and Endiness from the videogame Legend of Dragoon

At any rate. Leave the poor cacti alone Doug.

So it looks like Doug wound up a world with nothing but dinosaurs and beat them up when he wound up on an empty world.

No metahumans? What is Buffy, if she is not?

Has Doug met the Incredibles, Megamind, and been to Sky High?

Sunnydale has far more than vampires Doug. It also has demons.

I wonder if Doug is going to meet a certain cretin by the name of Quentin Travers and do something about the Watcher's Council.

Yes, Buffy and schools don't get along. She burned down one and she blew up another.

I think Doug will be able to help Buffy cope with the trauma she has suffered through. A mentor who won't pull any of the sleezy tricks that the Council did(Cruiciaem for example?)

Hm. Eight marks of favor, a divine relic in God's Toothpick, blood from the Fates, and a few other things. It seems like Doug's exile was more gathering weapons and knowledge to bring down Glory.

Nice chapter and I hope to see more soon.
Comments from author:
Slayers was taken out of the official itinerary years ago, although there is an incomplete reader-written Slayers installment on my website; the other I've never heard of.

>> No metahumans? What is Buffy, if she is not?

Oh, definitely a metahuman... but not one in the papers.

>> I wonder if Doug is going to meet a certain cretin by the name of Quentin Travers and do something about the Watcher's Council.

Let's just say that anything that happened in Season Five on whose cause Doug has no direct impact still happens as in canon -- at least until it collides with Doug.

>> Nice chapter and I hope to see more soon.

Thanks. It might be a little while, as I'm trying to get several different stories going in parallel to make up for the long dry spell since DW5 chapter 6 came out in 2008.
Review By [Disruptor] • Date [8 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue and Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)thetwitmachine
Review:
Never heard of this particular fiction, but the story is very well written, enough so that I can follow along even without real prior knowledge.

great start!
Comments from author:
Thank you. We deliberately crafted the chapter to be accessible to readers regardless of what fandom they came from; I'm glad to see it worked.
Review By [(Recent Donor)thetwitmachine] • Date [8 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue and Chapter One" from DaBear
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I love Loony Tunes and his adventures, great to see more.
Review By [DaBear] • Date [8 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue and Chapter One" from Zed
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been following the main character (doug) in his varied adventures for a while now... this is a fantabulous story, even if the updates are slow in coming. i'll take quality over quantity any day!
Comments from author:
Thanks. I'm trying to improve my update speed -- that's one reason I've switched to working on stories in parallel, particularly those with co-writers.
Review By [Zed] • Date [8 Apr 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Prologue and Chapter One" from stormcloud
Review:
great story
Review By [stormcloud] • Date [8 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Prologue and Chapter One" from war
Review:
good story looking forward to your next chapter.
Comments from author:
Thank you. It might be a little while, as I still have the final chapter of Drunkard's Walk V to finish up with Chris Angel. But Helen and I have the next chapter already laid out and we've started writing, so there is work being done.
Review By [war] • Date [8 Apr 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
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