Review of chapter "The Prison" from Shadowcub
All I can see is a lot of useless whining, have sex with the girl for gods sake. Jeez no wonder they got caught.
Review By [Shadowcub
] • Date [11 Jun 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Three: The Consequence" from Ailsam
Any chance at an update as I really, really want to know what happens next?!! Interesting to see a 'Harry Potter' story that uses different characters to usual, and in a different setting. I really would love to see more.
Review By [Ailsam
] • Date [10 May 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "The Sacrifice" from Klimmatt
Wow, this is a pretty unique idea and really interesting so far.
Review By [Klimmatt
] • Date [30 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "One: The Wasteland" from Charlotte
Highly intriguing! Very interested in reading more.
Review By [Charlotte
] • Date [10 Apr 11] • Not Rated