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Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from (Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood
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At this point, I suspect this one is dead, but I was hoping to see where it went. Alas...
Review By [(Current Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [8 Aug 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Narf
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Nice, keep up the good work thanks and bye.
Review By [Narf] • Date [10 Jan 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from AllenPitt
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Interesting. And since this is the '2nd use' of his wand, he's out for sure, even though Angel used it. Hm, does the prophecy even apply to Harry anymore? He wasn't "born to" the ones that thrice defied, but he IS 'marked as an equal'. Unless adopted counts? One also wonders what would happen if he arrived back home, would he gain all the super powers Connor had on the show? Probably... Would his wand work there?
Meanwhile Dumbledore isn't going to let go of him easily. And Voldemort still wants him dead, badly. Hm, there are vampires in this world, so maybe Angel still has some traits of same?
One wonders if there's a council & a slayer in this world....
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [30 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from AnFan
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Another thought has come to me. What happened to Angellus? You know, the blood demon? Is it still a part of Angel in some way? Was it separated from him? Is this why there was a prophesy of him killing his son?

It would be interesting to have the two of them separated in this world and causing problems. I guess it depends on which world you want to end this story in. If it's this one, then they just work out helping Harry till Vmort is gotten rid of. Then it's just a choice of splitting up or not later. Their callings will eventually pull many of them back to the Buffyverse, and they will probably all decide to go because they are like family to each other. I can't imagine with the way Harry is treated in the wizarding world that he would be happy with staying there. If it were me in his place, I'd want to go to the Buffyverse to see what happened to me to make a decision. If it wasn't bad, I just might decide to go with my Angel. That is if they connect as father and son.

You could also have left Angelus back in LA. Causing mischief and getting ready for everyone to return so he could kill them. :)
Review By [AnFan] • Date [30 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from AnFan
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I was just thinking, I wonder if Angel has a magical core in this world. After all, Harry does, and even if James adopted Harry it's very unlikely any ritual would have given him a magical core. I'm sure it wouldn't have mattered to the Potters. If the baby hadn't been magical, they would probably have adopted it anyway. If there was a way to give a child a magical core, squibs wouldn't be a problem. It would also be very easy to get a magical hair for any family just by stealing a baby and making doing whatever to blood adopt them and make them magical.

I also wonder if Cordelia will get any visions. It depends on where the visions come from I suppose. If they are sent to her, she might not. If it is a property of her being, she might.
Review By [AnFan] • Date [30 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from AnFan
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Have you found a Beta reader yet? You might want to look for one if you haven't. I noticed a lot of errors in this chapter and I know this site doesn't like that kind of thing. They will even kill a story if it gets too bad in their eyes.

Maybe you have a family member who can look it over for you.

Other than that, good chapter. I don't think I ever saw much of these episodes for Angel, so it's great to get a perspective on them :)
Review By [AnFan] • Date [30 Dec 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from AnFan
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I like this so far, hopefully that will continue. Can't wait to find out what, if anything, Harry's genetic origin will mean. Wonder if you will have James do some kind of blood adoption or some such? Will it happen with both of them or just James? Is this why he is a copy of his father at a younger age? Will his origin mean he isn't as damaged by malnutrition as a normal human would be? And will Holtz be punished by Harry for starting a trend of leaving him on a doorstep?

See, lots of possibility in this chapter. That makes it engaging and a great start to a story. Thanks.

Oh, btw, I think your statement on time in the begging of this chapter is backwards. If time moved slower in the Potterverse (and wouldn't Snape love it being called that), then no matter how long it took Angel to find him, he would still be a baby. I think you meant to say that time moved slower in the Buffyverse (it will never be the Angelverse).

Now, back to reading! :D
Review By [AnFan] • Date [30 Dec 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Vickzie
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Cool story, hope they find out Harry is Connor soon
Review By [Vickzie] • Date [5 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from mishaptaketwo
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This story has a lot of potential and a great start. I am very eager to see where you will take it from here. Please keep up the great work and I hope to see more soon.
Review By [mishaptaketwo] • Date [9 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from CrystalBlaze
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When Angel finds out the whole truth, there's the possibility he'll support the kid's efforts and try to get Harry through it all alive.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [17 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from dreameralways
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Interesting story. So does Harry look like James because of a spell or coincidence? I look forward to more.
Review By [dreameralways] • Date [17 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Hanzo
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♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [16 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from MarcusSLazarus
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A bit ambiguous about Angel becoming human in the Potterverse, but the implications of Harry being Connor should DEFINITELY be interesting to explore once they realise who each of them are...
Review By [MarcusSLazarus] • Date [16 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from WillowRosenberg
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I really like this, for some reason. I don't know exactly why, but something just catches me and makes me want to keep reading. Which is weird, because I don't usually like fics like this. You could also use a beta (AHEM: I'm available) for small yet consistent errors. And why is Angel human? I seem to remember a vampire (Sanguini in HBP) actually existing. I think I'll be tracking this one, but I'm hoping you'll revise and correct all the errors you have.

And looking back over, why did James erase Lily's memories? I think she'd be happy to have a son, even if it wasn't her own. And is Connor a wizard or no? Sorry if you'd answered these questions and I missed them.

I liked it, but the plot isn't consistent, you have typos and grammatical errors, etc etc etc. I'm looking forward to updates, though, and I suggest requesting a beta on the forums (www.forum.tthfanfic.org) or on your story.

Lily
Review By [WillowRosenberg] • Date [16 Aug 11] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from AllenPitt
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There are vampires in the HP world, it's weird that Angel would just stop being one... Hm, but it does explain why HP doesn't have Connor -level abilities such as super strength etc. He would back in the slayer-world if he ever went there?
Hm, and HP hasn't read the letter. Which among other things might mean he'll miss the trial at the Wizangamot and potentially get expelled, maybe? Also if he no longer considers the Dursley's house his home, then the wards have fallen?
Dumbledore probably thinks he's been kidnapped by death eaters at this point. Then again, HP is likely fairly angry over the usual "radio silence" where he doesn't hear from his friends or the order during the entire summer.
Any chance that any of the fang gang can use a wand?
Review By [AllenPitt] • Date [16 Aug 11] • Not Rated
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