Fun start! Got any more?

ahh nice meeting with SG1 and I think Hammond will need some of his stomach pills soon :)

Merry Christmas, and to all a good life. Prayers for a update are always included.

Thank you for the Christmas wishes! May you have many many happy holidays forever. XD

For those of you wondering ... I'm back at work on this story and plan to update it soon. I've had one of the worst years of my life, but I'm not giving up. I love to write!

For my fans - thank you for your continued urging and support.

-- electrosolar

please continue! :D

Xander transformed into Darth Maul and now is near SG1? I hope Maul didn't get the overhand.

♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪

great chapter, keep up the good work, byes

Great chapter. Keep up the good work.

This looks like it's going to be pretty interesting. Will Xander be able to use the Force, too?

Took him a while but Xander seems to have got it :) And now he has cool weapons and tech to geek out over! I hope he keeps looking on the bright side and doesn't get too depressed that he may never see his friends again.

Firing on a non-hostile alien and threatening him? Who are these clowns impersonating SG1?

This is the beta here. First off, it's still roughly in season 1, so they're still not sure as to who's friendly or not, and they are probably jumpy about other Goa'uld attacking them. Xander also made a move toward the staff weapon and they saw that as an aggressive move. Also, looking as he does like Darth Maul (i.e. a practical carbon copy in Xander shape), he also looks fairly threatening.

Now that that's done, I want to say how glad, and honored, Electrosolar and I are to see one of my favorite authors, and one of (in my opinion) the best comedy writers on this site, reading this story.

Electrosolar here. Criticism is a good thing! I'm honored that you're reading the story with a critical eye, and thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. :-)

Excellent work so far! Really looking forward to more, one of the more realistic characterizations I've seen of someone suddenly changed into something else.

Are you planning on turning Xander back to human at some date?

I don't want to give anything away in the story line. Let's just say I'm not going to be mean to poor Xander.

Poor Xander.Will they believe he's human or not is the big question now(and will the Scoobies find him is the other big question).

either you made Xander dumber than he really is or I missed reading something somewhere in the earlier two chapters. also you're summary says: "Xander becomes a famous Star Wars character and winds up in the SG-1 universe"... that would imply he has knowledge of what happened to him, etc... from the look of things, he lost a few of his marbles after the damned change by the way he was acting (that's not an upgrade as it looked more like a downgrade). I'll wait one more chapter to see if it'll make sense later, but as it is, my interest is already hanging by a thread. I've read one reviewer suggest maybe make it a Force Unleashed deal.... but since you're not really familiar with it, I guess not.

What was your aim anyway with the story? Have him have Darth Maul's abilities yet stay a Jedi? Or go down as a Sith or somewhere in-between? Him having no memory sorta defeats that purpose... especially now that his original DNA has gone bye-bye. Try reading "Jedi Harris" and "The Terran Jedi" By Scribbler for hints/ideas as it looks like you're trying to make this story up as you go per chapter. Get a beta reader to help if you can find one willing to do so.

This story isn't bad per say.... certainly not the worst I've seen so far, just keep practicing.