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Review of chapter "Unraveling the Gordian Knot." from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Another story ended far to soon. Any chance of an update?
Comments from author:
Actually, yes. I'm in the process of relocating to Denver, CO, where I will be settling in and focusing on my writing. My goal is to be commercially published, and to that end I need a better work environment than the one I am in this day.

Give me a few weeks, and we'll see if I can get the magic rolling again!
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [25 Feb 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unraveling the Gordian Knot." from DarthTenebrus
Review:
That was so totally Xander's reaction. I wonder if he ends up displaying Force talents?

This should have been updated ages ago...
Review By [DarthTenebrus] • Date [5 Jan 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unraveling the Gordian Knot." from (Recent Donor)nerfherder
Review:
Fun start! Got any more?
Review By [(Recent Donor)nerfherder] • Date [30 Mar 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unraveling the Gordian Knot." from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
ahh nice meeting with SG1 and I think Hammond will need some of his stomach pills soon :)
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [16 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "And so it begins ..." from BlueEyedJedi
Review:
Merry Christmas, and to all a good life. Prayers for a update are always included.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the Christmas wishes! May you have many many happy holidays forever. XD

For those of you wondering ... I'm back at work on this story and plan to update it soon. I've had one of the worst years of my life, but I'm not giving up. I love to write!

For my fans - thank you for your continued urging and support.

-- electrosolar
Review By [BlueEyedJedi] • Date [26 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unraveling the Gordian Knot." from Zyanadryn
Review:
please continue! :D
Review By [Zyanadryn] • Date [10 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Tangle of Chaos" from (Recent Donor)Hawklan
Review:
Xander transformed into Darth Maul and now is near SG1? I hope Maul didn't get the overhand.
Review By [(Recent Donor)Hawklan] • Date [20 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unraveling the Gordian Knot." from Hanzo
Review:
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [23 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unraveling the Gordian Knot." from gaulty
Review:
great chapter, keep up the good work, byes
Review By [gaulty] • Date [11 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unraveling the Gordian Knot." from Morgomir
Review:
Great chapter. Keep up the good work.
Review By [Morgomir] • Date [12 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unraveling the Gordian Knot." from Selias
Review:
This looks like it's going to be pretty interesting. Will Xander be able to use the Force, too?
Review By [Selias] • Date [12 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unraveling the Gordian Knot." from Gideon
Review:
Took him a while but Xander seems to have got it :) And now he has cool weapons and tech to geek out over! I hope he keeps looking on the bright side and doesn't get too depressed that he may never see his friends again.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [12 Apr 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unraveling the Gordian Knot." from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Review:
Firing on a non-hostile alien and threatening him? Who are these clowns impersonating SG1?
Comments from author:
This is the beta here. First off, it's still roughly in season 1, so they're still not sure as to who's friendly or not, and they are probably jumpy about other Goa'uld attacking them. Xander also made a move toward the staff weapon and they saw that as an aggressive move. Also, looking as he does like Darth Maul (i.e. a practical carbon copy in Xander shape), he also looks fairly threatening.

Now that that's done, I want to say how glad, and honored, Electrosolar and I are to see one of my favorite authors, and one of (in my opinion) the best comedy writers on this site, reading this story.

Electrosolar here. Criticism is a good thing! I'm honored that you're reading the story with a critical eye, and thank you for sharing your thoughts with us. :-)
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [12 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Unraveling the Gordian Knot." from Loatroll
Review:
Excellent work so far! Really looking forward to more, one of the more realistic characterizations I've seen of someone suddenly changed into something else.
Review By [Loatroll] • Date [12 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Unraveling the Gordian Knot." from LadyFoxFire
Review:
Are you planning on turning Xander back to human at some date?
Comments from author:
I don't want to give anything away in the story line. Let's just say I'm not going to be mean to poor Xander.
Review By [LadyFoxFire] • Date [12 Apr 11] • Not Rated
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