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Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from ajw
Review:
Very good story.

Xander as a vampire is both interesting and scary. Especially as an ensouled vamp so he still has all the competence of the human Xander to balance out the blood lust of the demon within making him one of the few vampires capable of long term strategic planning. Thus a very dangerous vampire indeed whose probably already a master level vamp.

I don't blame him though for wanting revenge on Buffy, Amy and Angel. The sad part is I can so see Buffy doing what she did in this fic especially to Xander. Buffy has always been selfish and had a major fixation on Angel to the point where she refused to really take action when he turned back into Angelus in canon forcing Xander in the end to lie to her in order to ensure she actually did her job as the Vampire Slayer. The fact that she did this and got Amy to cast the spell for her is not surprising as at the point in the timeline this occured Willow would never have cast the spell for Buffy - a year later possibly as she didn't hesitate to betray Xander and try to force him out of the group in season three all because he was the 'normal' one and Ms Control Freak aka Buffy Summers didn't want him getting hurt.

I am also not surprised Angel fell back into his old human habits. The same habits that got him turned into a vampire in the first damned place. You know a good start to Xander's revenge on Buffy could be him finding out about Angel's infidelity and maybe having it recorded and sending the recordings to Buffy - let her see how unfaithful her beloved boyfriend really is. Then kill Amy or first find away of striping Amy's powers from her - maybe Tara can help with that come up with a spell or magic potion that strips Amy of her ability to use magic. Then have Xander kill Amy and leave her body where Buffy will find it. Kill Angel at the same time and leave his body where Buffy will find it which would certainly break her. Only then kill her.
Review By [ajw] • Date [7 Jun 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from juansiete
Review:
GOOD STORY
Review By [juansiete] • Date [3 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from BrownFinderth
Review:
So, the plot is revealed to the good guys. Yay!!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [17 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from Harry
Review:
Well, Tara and Faith found the scroill. Time to show it to Giles and start repairing the work that Amy has done on his mind. As for the meeting between Xander and Joyce, I don't forsee any problems. Even Spike has liked Joyce and either one of these two vamps would be honored to sit down and talk things out with her. I feel that once Joyce has found out from Xander what has happened, she will support him wholeheartedly.
Review By [Harry] • Date [23 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from Harry
Review:
Something tells me that Joyce is doing some hard thinking on what Tara and Faith have told her. And if she believes it, then her daughter has fallen off the wagon all for the love of Angel. This is grounds not only for disowning her, but for making sure she cannot enter the house again! Change the locks, put wards up, do whatever it takes to keep Buffy, Angel and Amy out of the house! Because if they suspect that you know Joyce, Amy might not just wipe your mind, she might turn YOU into a rat or worse!
Review By [Harry] • Date [23 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 8" from Harry
Review:
Well, I think that the G Man is going to have to do some thinking after what Tara told him. At least she did it in a polite way, so as not to upset him. But I think that, once Joyce finds out, she is going to want to skin her daughter ALIVE for doing this!
Review By [Harry] • Date [23 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from Harry
Review:
Well, F had a talk with Tar Bear. And while it may have left Tara with some doubts, it also gave her somethings to think about. And with the Innovative in town, it looks like Xander may have to modify his plans for the big three headaches!
Review By [Harry] • Date [23 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 6" from Harry
Review:
X-Man, you did the right thing in talking to Faith. If ANYONE can understand what has gone on, its her. It may take her some time to work all of this out, but if she does choose to support Xander, then B, Angel and Amy are as good as dead. No turning them into vampires. Oh no! Its true death for all three of them!
Review By [Harry] • Date [23 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 5" from Harry
Review:
I think that if Xander brings Faith in on the plan, it will go better. She had nothing to do with B's actions for Angel, and I think once F finds out, she will want to help bring the trio of Summers, Angel and Madison down! And I think that Tara is starting to fall slowly for Xander. But, I think he wants to play it slow as well. The chemistry may be there, but this is one time its best to take it slow.
Review By [Harry] • Date [23 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Harry
Review:
I think that once Tara finds out the truth about Xander, she is going to have some thinking to do. And I believe she will side with Xander in his actions against Buffy, Amy and Angel. Those three need to pay for what they did. Faith, I don't think she was in the know on this. Red, I think was more interested in the magicks than what happened. And I think that the group did this without Giles knowing about it. If he had, he would have put his foot down very quickly on this matter.
Review By [Harry] • Date [22 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2" from Harry
Review:
Tara has the right idea about the use of Magicks. Use it carefully, and with respect and know what you want to do with it, unlike Amy, and potentailly Willow, who want to learn everything no matter what the price you would have to pay for it is. Amy, you may be treading with fire, especially if you try to alter Giles memories. The watcher has done his own magic in his past, and will NOT be a easy victim for a memory altering spell.
Review By [Harry] • Date [22 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Harry
Review:
B, you just made a powerful enemy in Xander. Doing this just to keep Angel arouind is going to make Xander upset, as well as, if it ever gets back to them, the Watchers Council! You broke the rules, and sooner or later, you WILL have to pay!
Review By [Harry] • Date [22 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 10" from CageFire
Review:
Really nice to see a new chapter, keep up the great work. :)
Review By [CageFire] • Date [21 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from Dragonelf
Review:
You have done a good job so far with the story and I hope you will be inspired to add more chapters soon.


::Gives the plot bunny a slice of Chocolate Apple Pie::

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Neither fire nor wind,
birth nor death can
erase our good deeds.
- Buddha
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Review By [Dragonelf] • Date [9 Apr 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 9" from BrownFinderth
Review:
Razial has certainly written a very fine story here!!! I am apprehensive as to what will happen to Buffy, knowing that she has transgressed in deed!! I hope the author will quickly return to this cliff-hanger of a tale!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [10 Feb 12] • Not Rated
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