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Review of chapter "Telling Tales" from SpikesChewToy
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I hope you continue this story at some point in the (hopefully not too distant) future. I really enjoyed reading about this world so far, in both this story and the previous "Far Away Lands".

The idea that both Xander and Dawn would be brought to Narnia is great, as Dawn put it; "Like father, like daughter" that cracked me up!

I also like that your characters are very lifelike/realistic rather then 2 dimensional comic book style. They have real problems, and emotions, and need help dealing with things/seeing how their actions are effecting others.
Review By [SpikesChewToy] • Date [24 Sep 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Telling Tales" from HappyWonKinobi
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You know, after talking with friends and family tonight, an idea came to me after a quote and an assumption. See, what happened was my brother began the Elder Scrolls V: Skyrim quote "Dragons, here in Whiterun?" and a friend of my sister mentioned that she thought he was going to finish it with Narnia? rather than Whiterun?, and then my sister mentioned that dragons have been noted in Narnia (which, I noted that there were only two: the one that resided in that cave they found in Voyage of the Dawn Treader, and the one that was technically Eustace [I just googled it, his name is Eustace]), and the thought came to me that that could be the main antagonist of this story. In the last one, it was simply a slice-of-life story, similar to my Misadventures of SG-6 story, where Xander has suddenly found himself in Narnia and aiding the Kings and Queens of Narnia, especially Lucy. (P.S., I liked how you made his fighting style there) :)

Anyway, the enemy there was just random enemies of Narnia as they showed up, other than plot devices, like Peter and Edward challenging him because he mocked their semi-rightful pride in their fighting abilities. The enemy here could either be orchestrated by a dragon (as the sentient sub-species sets, fictional though the entire species may be, are generally regarded as tricky and intelligent creatures), or perhaps having a dragon as part of the ending. Just saying.

Hope you can bring us a new chapter for this and that you thought my idea had merit.
Review By [HappyWonKinobi] • Date [21 Jun 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Telling Tales" from HappyWonKinobi
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Very good so far! I wonder what will happen next, since the first one in this series was so very good! Hope you will continue this story soon! :)
Review By [HappyWonKinobi] • Date [20 Apr 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Telling Tales" from Bill
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OUTSTANDING!
Review By [Bill] • Date [3 Sep 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Telling Tales" from Letomo
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I loved the previous story [it made me cry, a powerful story, indeed]. And this one looks like a good start. Is there any chance it will be continued?
Comments from author:
It is coming, but slowly. Most of my time is going into Rising from the Darkness but when I get the chance I work on this one. Thank you for the review and I'm glad you like what I have written.
Review By [Letomo] • Date [11 Jun 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Telling Tales" from DesitaniaF
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might just be falling in love? probably.
Review By [DesitaniaF] • Date [6 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Telling Tales" from BlackAstral
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I have just finished reading Far Away Lands and I saw this story as a sequel. I do hope that your muse still has the life to continue this, I enjoyed the world you set up in the first story and hope it continues
Review By [BlackAstral] • Date [16 Jan 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Telling Tales" from Mordare
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Very nice story. Now I will have to find the first one & read it.
Review By [Mordare] • Date [31 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Telling Tales" from AbscondingCascade
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Yes! A sequel to your marvelous tale, This is officially brilliant! In thanks for this -http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vU78mBIguaE
Review By [AbscondingCascade] • Date [22 Nov 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Telling Tales" from DarkFaerieYumi
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Squeeeeeeeeee! *glomps* your back! I'm so happy!
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [22 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dawn Takes a Walk" from deamon
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ok I like it so far lol. Hope to see an update soon. I sctually found this story cuz I as hopin for an update/ au sequel to far away lands lol.
Review By [deamon] • Date [5 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dawn Takes a Walk" from DarkFaerieYumi
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SQUEEEEEEE!!!!!! *glomps* YAY! You made a sequel...of sorts! WOOT!
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [13 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dawn Takes a Walk" from Bluejello
Review:
Interesting continuation! I can't wait to see what you've got planned, here.
Review By [Bluejello] • Date [12 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Dawn Takes a Walk" from VillageOrchid
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Twisty indeed.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [11 Apr 11] • Not Rated
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