that was really nice... no wrong word... sweet, more like it but still not yet what I mean... you know, it drove a tear to my eyes and brought a smile to lips at the same time, so, I really like it!!!
I hope you'll write a sequel to this, as to me it seems, that this story end here.
Bye Sanchan
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. Don't worry the story isn't over yet. I'm just experiencing writer's block for it. I'll update as soon as my inspiration comes back.
Review By [Sanchan] • Date [25 Dec 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Excellent chapter. Xander's trepidation about what his move is going to be like is quite apparent; I am looking forward to seeing how his relationship with his father develops and how Xander adjusts to life outside of Sunnydale.
Review By [severuswinchester] • Date [11 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
good story i was wondering if u r going to stay away from the BTVS side and just stick to the NCIS side of bad stuff for now. at least til Xander healed up. or maybe some big bad takes a swing at him since he is separated from the slayer and easy to hurt. Gibbs probably has one of those welcome mates at his house and he always leaves the door unlocked. so anyone can get in. just an idea for u. I'm looking forward to whatever u update with
Review By [kelvin] • Date [2 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]