Review of chapter "A Fairy Halloween" from justapiranha
Only one thing to point out, Oz becoming a wolf didn't happen until later on in the season. Otherwise like it.
Review By [justapiranha
] • Date [13 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Fairy Halloween" from JediKnight
Very noce, but you said Willow was going to be Tinkerbell and the spell activated you still called her Willow and she remembered being human; Tinkerbell was always a fairy.
Review By [JediKnight
] • Date [13 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Fairy Halloween" from Neverwillmini
Interesting, but Halloween was the first time Oz had ever seen Willow (in passing) so he wasn't a beau at this point. Also, he hadn't yet been bit by Jordie, nor found out he was a werewolf yet (unless you're going to add a note that they met, and his wolfiness was discovered earlier).
Review By [Neverwillmini
] • Date [12 Apr 11] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Fairy Halloween" from CPTSkip
Thank you so much. And you were so quick! Lol! Now that you have removed Oz's werewolf curse, I wonder if he and Willow turn into fairies three days a month during the Full Moon? And isn't either Willowbell or Tinkerwillow great names for a fairy? Lol! Why wouldn't this story fit into the Angel series? I mean, unless you already have a transformation for Oz and Willow planned. Of course, if Willow is now a were-fairy, can she also turn Tara into one by biting her if and when they become lovers? Lol!
Review By [CPTSkip
] • Date [12 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Fairy Halloween" from uten
Very nice idea, but there are a few problems.
First, the easy ones. Tink's name is 'Tinkerbell' - there is no extra 'e' at the end. Also, The line about Willow and her beau's makes no sense - Oz was her only boyfriend (apart from the 'Fluke').
The big one is this - Oz wasn't a werewolf at this point - and certainly couldn't feel the wolf inside him.
You could fix that by adding a note at the start to say he was bitten earlier though.
Review By [uten
] • Date [12 Apr 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Fairy Halloween" from WildMartin
I just finished reading this and 'A Different kind of Chosen.' I liked them both, but was wondering where the 1st story is since these are labeled as stories 2 and 3?
Comments from author:
Sorry WildMartin, the first story has been temporarily quarantined due to a spelling mistake I didn't pick up on in a Summary. Hopefully it will be freed up soon.
Review By [WildMartin
] • Date [12 Apr 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Fairy Halloween" from jormunguard
Of the three YAHF stories that you've recently posted, I think that this is the idea I like the least for the characters. With Buffy, Xander and Cordelia you have three choices that work with their characters and would be interesting reads to see where you go. However, Oz and Willow's choices seem more like jokes than anything, it could make a possible comedy story but that's about it. I just can't see either Oz or Willow dressing up as Tinkerbell style fairies.
I also gotta ask what you mean by Willow's beaus. She's only had one boyfriend.
Review By [jormunguard
] • Date [12 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "A Fairy Halloween" from Panaka
To short to count as a chapter or to make a judgement.
Review By [Panaka
] • Date [12 Apr 11] • Rating [3 out of 10]