Good work. Your plot was a good match for the crossover and the ending was unexpected even though you led up to it well. I'm not sure if I would call it a win for the good guys, but I guess it wasn't a loss.
Comments from author:
Thank you:) Nothing is ever truly a win for the good guys in the Angel universe. A draw is really as good as it gets.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [17 May 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
One of the more well-thought-out Leverage/A:tS crossovers I've seen. Good job. Though it didn't make sense why the senior partners used bits of Eliot for fuel to resurrect Lindsey, if they have no connection other than looks? I hope you follow up on that plot-tag about the contract, too, that was reader cruelty!
Comments from author:
I have to admit, the connection between Lindsey and Eliot was a plot device that I decided was too contrived after I had already used him to resurrect Lindsey. You are right there.
I have plans to follow up on that plot tag:) I just need a little down time from this setting and then I will be back at it!
Thank you so much for reviewing!
Review By [jedibuttercup] • Date [24 Apr 11] • Not Rated
I really enjoyed this story- one of my favourites, for sure. Thanks so much! :)
Comments from author:
You are very welcome:) I might tell people what was in the contract later, but I have an entirely different plot bunny nibbling at my toes right now LOL
Love Parker. She's such a legend- and a sweetheart, to boot, trying to look out for Elliot as best she can. I'm amazed that she got away from Hardison and Nate though. Clever girl. :)
I was reading that and I really, really wanted to see Nate saunter in, claiming to be from Head Office, there to accompany Mr. McDonald to the infirmary... and then jump down the elevator shafts and flee... :(
As always, excellent update. :)
Comments from author:
Thank you :) I'm glad you liked the chapter. Every once in a while its fun to see our boy down for the count. Yes, indeed I am an evil woman.
Ooohhh... I'm really not liking Angel's attitude toward Elliot here- he's supposed to help the helpless and while I wouldn't normally use that word to describe Elliot, it fits here. But I always thought Angel was a douche so, no change really. ;)
Also: Yay for Lindsay. Woot. :)
Comments from author:
Glad you like that twist:) I love getting your reviews. THanks so much!