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Review of chapter "Chapter 35" from AndreaMaine
I know this story is complete at this time, but you know you left a great opening for a follow on or sequel story. I am thinking one following the careers of Second Lieutenants Xander O'Neill, Willow Rosenberg, and Cassandra Fraiser would be interesting.
Review By [AndreaMaine] • Date [8 Jul 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 35" from (Past Donor)severuswinchester
I really enjoyed reading this story. It was very entertaining and I liked how Jack was able to take in both Willow and Xander in. The action scenes were fast-paced and exciting. The more tender scenes featuring Jack being a caring father were lovely.
Review By [(Past Donor)severuswinchester] • Date [29 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 35" from DieselDriver
Hey! Writer's block happens. Not your fault. Muses are peculiar beings.
Great ending point for this part of the story. I'm really looking forward to reading more of your work.

To bad the networks couldn't pull something like this together. That would be so cool!

Thanks for posting.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [11 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 31" from DieselDriver
Objection!!! Fluff??? Maybe, but that kind of fluff is what makes life worth living. We all need more "fluff" in our lives.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [11 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 29" from DieselDriver
I have to comment... " bended the truth". Really? "Bended"? How about "Bent"? As in "bent the truth".

Other than that egregious "bending" of the English language I am really enjoying the story. You write really well and that makes the occasional error stand out even more.

You commented that Jack was "ooc" which I am assuming means "out of character" but you know, I don't care. It fits the story you're writing and just because it's based on someone's character and stories doesn't mean it has to conform. In fact if it wasn't different, what would be the point. I'll also assume that "narky" means the same as "snarky". Not sure though. Never heard that word before, anywhere.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [11 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 21" from DieselDriver
Better the motherboard than the hard drive. Aren't memory stix wonderful?
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [10 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4" from DieselDriver
I'm curious about the wording of this statement: "Honestly, the more time he spent more time with her, the more she made him think of Sam, Daniel and Janet, as if she was a genetic mash-up of the three." in particular the words "genetic mash-up". I get the impression that you didn't mean "match-up" but maybe you did? Or did you mean more of a mix of the three?

Good story. I'm enjoying it. Thanks for posting it.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [10 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DieselDriver
Good start. You get the emotion across well, maybe a little stilted in the wording. I don't know how much you've written before this but you should get better. Like the guy who asked how you get to Carnegie Hall. The answer is "Practice, practice, and more practice". Looking forward to reading the rest.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [10 Sep 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 35" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
Decent ending. A bit rushed but not too bad and has a good feel to it.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [7 Jul 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 35" from heyu
I really enjoyed this. Any chance that, in the sequel, the newest SGC recruits have the last names of Frazier, O'Neill, and O'Neill?
Review By [heyu] • Date [16 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 35" from serenityselena
nice ending for this story ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [1 Feb 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 35" from Hawthorn
I really liked the blending of SG1 and Buffy. Although a long time fan of Stargate, I'm not overly familiar with the Buffy-verse, except for reading a few fanfiction crossovers with other fandoms that I follow. I very much enjoyed getting to know Xander and Willow through your eyes, and I look forward to reading more of your work, especially the proposed sequel. Thanks so much for sharing your concepts and talent.
Review By [Hawthorn] • Date [20 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 35" from (Current Donor)Sulien
If there was an "I Loathe Xander" club, I'd probably be it's president. However, I truly like the character as you've written him here and much prefer this story to actual canon. It isn't even just the fact that Xander doesn't betray Buffy by not telling her that Willow was attempting to return Angel's soul; it's that the Xander of your story isn't a jealous, self-centered git, he's a truly decent and caring human being. I thought it very apropos that Buffy went into the hell dimension with Angel and that Faith actually had a good, decent support system in the form of Giles and Joyce Summers after she arrived in Sunnydale (also unlike canon, which I hated...yes, there were a lot of things done in the show which I despised). I love how you managed to bring Xander and Willow into the lives of Jack O'Neill and SG-1 without overly bashing their parents (who deserve a lot worse than character bashing, if the truth be told). I'm also glad that Jack got a chance to enjoy having family in his life besides his team and I think you handled him and his reactions very well.

All in all, very nicely done! Thank you very much for sharing this story, it made for a wonderful evening's reading.
Review By [(Current Donor)Sulien] • Date [14 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 35" from maxthehobbit
Excellent story and the action parts were also good. You took facts from 'Buffy' and expanded them to create a better in-depth look at both Willow and Xander as well as a few thing thrown in about Jack and Daniel. Well put together.
Thank you for sharing.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [12 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 35" from IcemanII
Excellent job and I'm looking forward to your sequel some day.
Review By [IcemanII] • Date [12 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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