I really liked the blending of SG1 and Buffy. Although a long time fan of Stargate, I'm not overly familiar with the Buffy-verse, except for reading a few fanfiction crossovers with other fandoms that I follow. I very much enjoyed getting to know Xander and Willow through your eyes, and I look forward to reading more of your work, especially the proposed sequel. Thanks so much for sharing your concepts and talent.
Review By [Hawthorn] • Date [20 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
If there was an "I Loathe Xander" club, I'd probably be it's president. However, I truly like the character as you've written him here and much prefer this story to actual canon. It isn't even just the fact that Xander doesn't betray Buffy by not telling her that Willow was attempting to return Angel's soul; it's that the Xander of your story isn't a jealous, self-centered git, he's a truly decent and caring human being. I thought it very apropos that Buffy went into the hell dimension with Angel and that Faith actually had a good, decent support system in the form of Giles and Joyce Summers after she arrived in Sunnydale (also unlike canon, which I hated...yes, there were a lot of things done in the show which I despised). I love how you managed to bring Xander and Willow into the lives of Jack O'Neill and SG-1 without overly bashing their parents (who deserve a lot worse than character bashing, if the truth be told). I'm also glad that Jack got a chance to enjoy having family in his life besides his team and I think you handled him and his reactions very well.
All in all, very nicely done! Thank you very much for sharing this story, it made for a wonderful evening's reading.
Review By [Sulien] • Date [14 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Excellent story and the action parts were also good. You took facts from 'Buffy' and expanded them to create a better in-depth look at both Willow and Xander as well as a few thing thrown in about Jack and Daniel. Well put together. Thank you for sharing.
Review By [maxthehobbit] • Date [12 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
This was a wonderful story. Really loved how everyone was portrayed and the fact that you didn't sugarcoat relationships and let the story flow seamlessly. Thanks
Review By [leonamasha] • Date [8 Jan 13] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Congrats on completing your story. So many writers get started on what looks to be a quality story and then all of a sudden it just stops and the reader never gets to find out how the story turns out. Again, excellent job and I'm looking forward to your sequel some day.
Review By [Studyofchaos] • Date [8 Jan 13] • Not Rated
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