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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DieselDriver
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I wonder how the "Asp" would do up against Chiun, the master of Sinanju... or even his apprentice Remo.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [18 Oct 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)dogbertcarroll
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This would be an interesting story to see expanded.
Review By [(Current Donor)dogbertcarroll] • Date [20 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from trongod
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This is another that should be the lead chapter in an extended Story (please note the capital 'S' here). The ramifications pf Xander's actions and new abilities, combined with his knowledge of Slayer mythology, can send him on an early summer road trip without notifying the same people that have cast him aside. You can explore his skills and how the 3 personalities in his head (Xander, Hyena Primal, and The Asp) get along/merge as he goes along. Kendra can meet up with him in Cleveland - he's there for the Rock and Roll Museum; she's there ti=o prevent the opening of a Hellmouth under it. One resuscitated Slayer later, and Xander decides to visit Giles' "ole pal" (much younger niece? Sent to ensure another Buffy type dies early?)that has, according to a grateful and confused Mr. Zabuto, a Potential that just got activated.
Stir well, add a mutual growing attraction between all 3 (He, Watchers need love too! And Jenny's still alive, too...) and a road trip to Sunnyhell for backup.....

C'mon! You know you want to; the Dark Side Beckons With Cookies and Cold Milk....
Review By [trongod] • Date [15 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
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Cool idea. Does Asp "merely" identify with lizards or is he part Dragon (from the concept that Dragons or some of them can shape change)? Was Asp identified in the comic strip as an assassin or a body guard/detective type?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [15 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from katfairy
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Buffy and Willow I could see freaking out, but I can't see Giles completely cutting off Xander. Getting angry over Ethan's death, yes, but with Giles' history, there should have been some level of understanding of what happens when a spell goes bad. Especially since A) it was cast on everybody without their knowledge or consent, and B) it should have been clear even to Princess Peroxide that none of the enchanted were in control of their own actions. Buffy and Willow were immature enough to not make the distinction between Xander and somebody using Xander's body while he was metaphysically elsewhere (although they let his actions during the hyena thing slide), but Giles should have known better.
Review By [katfairy] • Date [15 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from michaelangelo
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Little orphan Annie teamed up with a deadly assassin? wtf? that's like, like, erm Odd Job or Jaws teaming up with Enid Blyton's Famous Five. A continuation of this story would be fun, but I bet very doubtful.
Review By [michaelangelo] • Date [15 Apr 11] • Not Rated
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