Large PrintHandheldAudioRating
using
 paypal
Twisting The Hellmouth Crossing Over Awards - Results
Rules for Challenges

Impressions

StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from SlowMercury
Review:
Glad to see how Dean and Dawn met--funny and in character. I especially liked Dawn's "I don't make the rules" comment, and how easily they transitioned from fighting demon summoning to eating pie.

I also liked Dawn and Bobby's meeting. Bobby's really the only member of Dean's family that he *can* introduce Dawn to right now, isn't he? What with John MIA and Sam off limits at school. I hope to see Dean and the Scoobies soon. And that Dean gets clued in that even if Dawn does go back to school, she won't be out of the supernatural life...

Anyway, good to see more of this story, and please keep up the good work!
Comments from author:
Thanks so much for your review. I thought Bobby was the only remotely normal person Dean could introduce herself to and Bobby can see the Winchesters objectively and he also loves Dean and will help Dawn see how good Dean is. And when John appears Bobby will be there to back Dawn up, whether Dean stands up for himself is still a mystery.

At the moment Dean thinks Dawn isn't invested in hunting, he only knows the bare bones of her life pre stanford, he doesn't know how deep it goes.

Again, thanks ever so much it's much appreciated
Katie
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [6 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from willowbee
Review:
Interesting. I wish it was a little more chronological instead of jumping around so much.
Comments from author:
Thanks, I am glad that you are keeping with the story even if it is jumping around. I am sorry you don't like the jumbled nature of the story but it's how I work.
Review By [willowbee] • Date [6 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Three" from CousinMary
Review:
Nice chapter. You might want to expand the bit with Dawn's call to Buffy to include Dean's reaction somehow, after all, she pretty much said exactly what he wishes Sam would.

Looking forward to more :)
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. There will be a time for Dean to react to the phonecall. I might to a chapter that is all phone calls between Buffy and Dawn, Sam and Dean, Sam and John, John and Dean.
Review By [CousinMary] • Date [6 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from CousinMary
Review:
Really liking this :)
Comments from author:
Thanks for your continued support :)
Review By [CousinMary] • Date [28 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Two" from SlowMercury
Review:
These are some very nice glimpses into Dawn and Dean. Only one that I really miss is how Dawn and Dean actually met in the talking-to-each-other sense. Actually, now that I think about it, I'd also love to see them interact with each other's families. Anyway, very nice work, please keep it up!
Comments from author:
Thanks for reviewing and making suggestions, I will be circling back to the begining of how they met. My mind is very dyspraxic I find it difficult to do things in linear form. There will be a formal meeting between each others family (Ive already started a Dawn/Sam/John scene. So hopefully it'll all loop around.
Thanks so much for taking the time to read and review :)
Katie
Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [28 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Xeelia
Review:
This is adorable!! Any chance of a part 2 from Dawn's point of view?
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review. There will be a second chapter from Dawn's point of view but so far it doesnt cover the same ground as Deans's. These are a series of little moments in their life so they won't necessarly be in order. I have the second chapter done just waiting to find a beta.
Review By [Xeelia] • Date [15 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CousinMary
Review:
This is awesome. I can't wait for more. Did Dawn drop out? What does Buffy think about that? How's Sam going react? Or John? Ooo... exciting :-D
Comments from author:
All good questions and in answer to them....you'll just have to see :)
Thanks ever so much for taking the time to review, it means alot.
Review By [CousinMary] • Date [15 Apr 11] • Not Rated
StoryReviewsStatisticsRelated StoriesTracking