Very interesting so far. I'm curious as to how this will progress and whether Maley is just blowing smoke cause she's evil like that or not. I'd be interested in what pairing you have in mind for Dawn since most of the characters baring Leon are much younger than her. Still this is a pretty good story and you've managed to incorporate the game play and powerups and everything into a story format without it being too cheesy or cliche, I'm definitely looking forward to more. Keep up the good work! Update soon!
Review By [Alastor] • Date [25 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Love it! Love it! It's very good. I like how you are showing Dawn becoming friends with Tranverse Town gang. But is she ever going to meet Sora? Can't wait to see what you do!
Comments from author:
She is going to meet Sora, but not yet. He has already left for Wonderland with Donald and Goofy but it will not be long before he comes back and Dawn meets him.
Review By [cloudleonsgurl] • Date [23 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not a Tuesday Scenario." from cloudleonsgurl
Review:
I've been truly looking for a good Kingdom Hearts and Dawn fic seeing how Dawn is the Key, I always thought there'd be more. Anyhow, I love the being and this has really potiental. Can't wait to see more.
Comments from author:
I'm surprised that I haven't seen it here as well and the idea kept bugging me to write it!
I should have another chapter in a day or two. Thanks for your review!
Review By [cloudleonsgurl] • Date [18 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Not a Tuesday Scenario." from Linnie
Review:
Really good story, update soon. By the way what does Nusta Rhiamon mean?
