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Review of chapter "Sweet Freedom (Pirates of the Caribbean)" from (Moderator)Ava
Review:
It's been awhile since I've seen a PotC movie so I can't comment on James, but Buffy was delightfully in character. I also completely agree with her assessment of society versus the open seas. :)

My only quibble is the use of the word cllick in the beginning. I liked the repetitive intro, but then the following sentence used the same word to describe the noise and I found it distracting for some reason.

Thank you for sharing!
Comments from author:
Thank *you* for reviewing. I'm glad you liked it and constructive criticism is always appreciated (I edited it a teeny tiny bit to make it more reader friendly).
Review By [(Moderator)Ava] • Date [18 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "One Final Look (Mentalist)" from (Moderator)Ava
Review:
While I don't watch Leverage or the Mentalist I did find the stories interesting, particularly the Mentalist ficlet.

I found the Supernatural story to be highly entertaining. I know Dean loves his Impala, but Dawn does have a point... :)
Review By [(Moderator)Ava] • Date [17 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "One Final Look (Mentalist)" from robertlisle
Review:
Nice set of little stories. Hope this inspires you to write more or longer.
Comments from author:
Thank you, will do my best(;
Review By [robertlisle] • Date [18 Apr 11] • Not Rated
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