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Papa Xander: A New Addition

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
I liked this, but am a little confused in the first story on how he's related to the Charmed sisters or if he's married to one of them. Victor is his father in-law? Or did you change perspective to Leo. In which case what would be Xander's connection???
Comments from author:
Leo is his brother in law, Piper and Phoebe are his sisters and Victor is his Dad. Does that help?
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [23 Sep 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from trongod
Review:
Really would like to see this expanded upon, if possible. The idea of Dumbledore running headlong into The Immovable Object And Irresistible Force that is Xander and his friends brings a happy smile to my face...
Comments from author:
*chuckle* Well, there are a couple more ficlets in this series already and I'm working on a couple more right now. I hope to get to that point eventually. *g*
Review By [trongod] • Date [27 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Recent Donor)LordMesron
Review:
Lovin' it! I think I liked the first one better, but just by a hair. You caught me out, thinking it was going to be Harry. Assuming that was you plan for the way you wrote it. Can't wait to see your next installment of this series. Any chance you are planning to hook Xander up with someone at some point? Or are you going to keep him as a single father? Either works.
Comments from author:
I actually haven't given it much thought yet, but if I do, it'll be a het pairing of some sort. Not sure which 'verse the woman would come from either, as there are several to choose from in this little universe I'm trying to create. In any case, it'll be a while before that would happen. Hope you like the next ficlet too, as I've just posted it.

Thanks for the review!:)
Review By [(Recent Donor)LordMesron] • Date [24 Apr 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from PsychoWing
Review:
Interesting. Does this mean that when Voldemort kills the Potters, Harry will be coming to live with Xander too?
Comments from author:
Yeah, I'm working on that part now. it just needs a few more touches and I'll be posting it AND the next part of Snippets as well. I got a good laugh from my best friend over the Snippets update, so hope everyone likes it too.
Review By [PsychoWing] • Date [24 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from JediKnight
Review:
Very interesting job on this. What about Harry and his side of the family?
Comments from author:
Thanks. What, you mean why didn't Petunia leave her child to Lily and James to raise? Those "freaks" raise HER precious little Duddykins? No, she'd have left her son to NORMAL people. LOL
Review By [JediKnight] • Date [21 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LMiC
Review:
I like this little ficlet. There are several fanfics out there that explore Dudley also having magic or being a late bloomer, here's a carrot for the rabid plot bunnies, in a different environment would a minor magical potential be able to flourish in Dudley? Or taking the traditional HP canon route and having no magical ability, would he feel a little like canon Xander as the odd man out because he is the "normal" guy surrounded by a world of people with special supernatural type of abilities? (Yes, I know I'm evil, heck you didn't need me to point that out.)
Comments from author:
*shriek* When I see you again, you're gonna get HIT woman! LOL You're lucky you're my best friend. ;)

Actually, I was already thinking of him having ... Wait, let me respond to this in email to give you proper spoilers, okay? *chuckle*
Review By [LMiC] • Date [21 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)SusanAnthony
Review:
Now that was a surprise! I'm guessing it won't be too long before Harry shows up? Dudley will certainly be a different person under Xander's guidance. I hope you write more in this story.
Comments from author:
Thank you. I had a feeling lots of people would be surprised by which kid this turned out to be. *chuckle*

Yes, he will be VERY different and yes, Harry will be along shortly, but that will be in the next ficlet as this one is done. *g* Thank you very much for the review. :)
Review By [(Current Donor)SusanAnthony] • Date [20 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from WolfWriter
Review:
Just read the two stories back to back. This should be good. Both Harry and Dudley being raised by Xander, a bunch of Slayers, related to the Charmed Ones, and both will be experts in the art of puppy dog eyes by the time they're three or so.

Can't wait to read the next one.

I'm just glad that Marge didn't get her hands on Dudley; he'd have been a career hoodlum at the age of five!
Comments from author:
Rats! I knew I was forgetting something. I planned on Marge being in the car when Vernon and Petunia bit it, so there ya go, she's dead too. The evil *insert suitable expletive here*, she deserved it for being so horrible. Ugh!

Oh yeah, thanks for reading and for your comments. I really appreciate them. :)
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [20 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Wolflady
Review:
Uh Oh! What's he going to do when the Potter's get killed in a couple of months?
Comments from author:
That'll be the next installment. *g* Thanks for the review. :)
Review By [Wolflady] • Date [20 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RafMereC
Review:
Cool.
Comments from author:
Thank you. :)
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [20 Apr 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from zlazar
Review:
Loved the story. After I finished it I decided to read up on how Xander became a father in the first story and i noticed something that I am now wondering about. Are the two stories in different universes or is it just a cultural mistake of some kind, because in the first one the girls name is Libah and in the second Willow calls his daughter Raibah? Anyway, again great story and keep up the good work.
Comments from author:
Shoot! Thank you for pointing that out. Raibah is in another universe, I screwed up and put the wrong name in there. I'll go change it now.

Thanks for the review!
Review By [zlazar] • Date [20 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Allyssiandra
Review:
Good story, will Harry be joining the family in a couple of months?
Comments from author:
Yep, that should be in the next installment, which is already half typed up. Gotta fly to work now, but thanks bunches for the review! :)
Review By [Allyssiandra] • Date [20 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Neverwillmini
Review:
I love that twist and the irony of having the Durseleys die in a car accident like they always told Harry his parents did. Now Xander is going to get another baby soon, isn't he, since Dudley & Harry were both very young when Harry was dropped off with Lily's only remaining family and now it's just Dudley & Xander. (He'll be going to the perfect place to handle any accidental magic. If DD isn't aware of just who he's leaving little Harry with, he'll be in for a surprise when Harry's eleven.)
Comments from author:
*snicker* Yeah, the Headmaster is definitely in for a surprise and yes, Harry will be along soon enough. Just working out the details and how much Dumbles will find out up front. It's about half typed already too, but I gotta run to work now. :(

Thanks for the review! :)

Oh yeah, I wanted to add a big thank you for being the only one so far to comment on the irony of Petunia and Vernon's deaths. I figured Vernon got behind a drunk driver and got fed up, tried to pass and whammo! Fitting end for such horrible people. *shrugs*
Review By [Neverwillmini] • Date [19 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Jaylynn
Review:
Interesting twist, I've always wondered how Dudly would be if not raised by his parents. That whole, nature vs nuture deal.
Comments from author:
Exactly! I plan on exploring that a little in these in short stories, among other things. Thanks for the review! *g*
Review By [Jaylynn] • Date [19 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Greywizard
Review:
Very nice setup. Duchess. ;-)

Can't wait for the old fart to show up to dump Harry on Xander, and I'd LOVE to see Dumbledore's reaction when he eventually realizes that Xander's not going to be providing the type of upbringing that's going to make Harry regard the Wizarding World as a wondrous alternative to the mundane one.

Also can't wait to see the old fart's face when he realizes that Harry's not only intelligent and competent but quite willing to deal with the arrogant purebloods in a manner that's going to leave more than jut bruises. ;-)
Comments from author:
LOL you know me so well! *snicker* I'll do my best not to disappoint. *g*
Review By [Greywizard] • Date [19 Apr 11] • Not Rated
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