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Review of chapter "chapter twelve" from (Current Donor)hols
Review:
This is a really good story I hope you update soon
Review By [(Current Donor)hols] • Date [21 Jul 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter twelve" from Eureka
Review:
Good chapter. So how are Spike and Dru going to convince Wills that they are not going to hurt her when A has already tried?
Review By [Eureka] • Date [18 Mar 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter twelve" from Genuka
Review:
its an interesting perdicament
Review By [Genuka] • Date [6 Mar 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Eleven" from Genuka
Review:
I wonder what Gareth is going to do when he finds out that Angelus is threatening his daughter? I wonder how badly Giles will freak when he figures out that Willow's dad is the Goblin King. *snicker* Oh what a chaotic field day to be had! More please!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [29 Nov 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of story "New memories" from Genuka
Review:
ACK! Let me guess, Blue screen of Death? To avoid having it crash again especially in this cyber-attack heavy day and age you need to update your anti-virus and spyware killer software weekly if not more and run it weekly to ensure that it doesn't kill your computer. Hope this was helpful. I can't help more without more info, Computer major or not.

~G
Comments from author:
it turns out that my antivirus and spy ware was the problem, it didn’t work well with what I was doing on the computer so it froze it completely, so that’s why I had to recover it. So now I won’t lose anything again because I am now backing up anything I write, and thank you for all the reviews
Review By [Genuka] • Date [31 Oct 11] • Not Rated • Edit Comment
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from Genuka
Review:
Wow! That would never have occurred to me to do it that way! More please!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [29 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Ten" from ManyNamedChibi
Review:
Good story. A bit slow paced as only one thing happens each chapter, but sometimes its hard to write more than one event, so its understandable.
You chapter nine and chapter ten are the same chapter though... may want to fix that.
Comments from author:
Thank you for telling me that. Try reading it now.
Review By [ManyNamedChibi] • Date [26 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from Emeraldfire
Review:
I hope you continue soon!
Review By [Emeraldfire] • Date [30 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Nine" from Genuka
Review:
*snicker* she just visited her dad and ^he's^ gonna want to know what the devil just happened. *snicker* Can't wait for more! *snicker*
Review By [Genuka] • Date [29 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter eight" from Genuka
Review:
Well that will definitely give Jareth something to think about. *snicker* More please!
Review By [Genuka] • Date [16 Jul 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "chapter eight" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
I see his instinctive response to the unexpected is still going strong and making his life more complicated.

Can you possibly not see this scene coming back to bite the asses of all involved?

Welcome to the Buffyverse, King Jareth. You've only begun to be Jossed.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [14 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter seven" from (Past Donor)lucidity
Review:
Great start! I love the idea and I'm interested in seeing where you go with this.

Thanks for sharing!
'lucidity
Review By [(Past Donor)lucidity] • Date [2 Jul 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter four" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
I think she'd cite a sense of duty. Also she'd be the motivation for Jareth to declare war on the forces of Darkness--He's savvy enough to know that if the human world truly fell, the Labyrinth would be next.

I knew Willow was gonna be taken from the moment I read the end of Chapter 2. "What can happen?" Please...



"No Covenant; You HAD to open your mouth!!"--an outraged Marine as the battle in the gravlift bay commences aboard the ^Truth and Reconciliation^ on Alpha Halo.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [3 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter four" from Pardryll
Review:
Minor issue - How did the Scoobies talking about Buffy and Willow lead to Angelus knowing exactly which of the 10+ cemeteries in Sunnydale that the two were patrolling? Otherwise, it's a great story. Please keep it up!
Comments from author:
if you remember at the begining of the fourth chapter, Angel was walking through a cemetery on his way to the school. Remember he had sensed her, so he just had to go back to the same cemetery from the begining.
Review By [Pardryll] • Date [3 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "chapter four" from WolfWriter
Review:
Is Jareth going to be an arsehole in this fic? He usually is in others that I've read.

Of course, if that's his attitude towards Angel, Spike and Dru, feel free to indulge. It should be fun to read.

Oooh! Oohh! Have him turn Angel into something that'll turn the vamp's stomach; like a cute, fluffy puppy that isn't housebroken!

Drusilla can become a butterfly, and Spike can become a yowly Siamese cat.
Comments from author:
I don't know yet. I'm just writing each chapter as I go.
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [2 May 11] • Not Rated
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