Sweet little fic. Your background development of Dawn's new life gave depth to the story. I was expecting more reaction from Bruce, but I guess he can be Batman-stoic whenever he wants. Does Dawn join the league of intrepid super heroes? I'm guessing not, but hope to be pleasantly surprised.
This was too cute. I think my favorite line was the very last thing Dawn said; and I concur. A very plausible explanation for her amazing powers of deduction. ;P
Review By [DawnieWrites] • Date [22 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Just re-read... and noticed the detail about bruising under his eyes, the soft part... and using concealer under-eye makeup. I can see the mask doing that. Looking forward to the next part you just posted.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [9 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Iys not very common for me to like one shots, however this was done to perfection. I don't know either to ask for a sequel or not???
Comments from author:
Well I'm glad that you enjoyed it, that means a lot to me. I'm not sure if there will be a sequel but I have idea's swirling about in a rather madcap haze at the moment and most are Dawn and Dick so it could happen.
Review By [dabraning] • Date [22 Apr 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Bruce: *After she's made her way out* And ^that^, Dick, is why I wear a cape. The bat emblem's the draw fire to the parts I can armor. The cape's because people focus on what they focus on, and my identifiers are ^covered^.
Comments from author:
Oh lord I just laughed so much picturing that. I think Dawn is a bit more than what the Batboys are used to. She doesn't get thrown easily and she can handle emergencies and injuries with a calm that only Alfred seems to possess. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [21 Apr 11] • Not Rated
I've probably read this story four times and I still read it a fifth time!!!
I really hope there will be a sequel -cross my fingers really hard xD- although it would also be great if you wrote a story about Dawn and Tim.
I really liked the way you presented the characters and the way you made the story seem so natural as if an encounter between the two could really happen.
Great job !! :)
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! To be honest I wasn't sure anyone would like it. I know sometimes I go in weird directions. I'm happy you read it not once, but 5 times?! That's insane but flattering. You might get a sequel out of this. No Dawn/Tim though, sorry.
Review By [Bouquet] • Date [21 Apr 11] • Not Rated
FaithUnbreakable
