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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from ShyBob
Review:
Sweet little fic. Your background development of Dawn's new life gave depth to the story. I was expecting more reaction from Bruce, but I guess he can be Batman-stoic whenever he wants. Does Dawn join the league of intrepid super heroes? I'm guessing not, but hope to be pleasantly surprised.
Review By [ShyBob] • Date [18 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DawnieWrites
Review:
This was too cute.
I think my favorite line was the very last thing Dawn said; and I concur.
A very plausible explanation for her amazing powers of deduction. ;P
Review By [DawnieWrites] • Date [22 Aug 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Kirallie
Review:
Loved it!!!!!!
Review By [Kirallie] • Date [9 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from VillageOrchid
Review:
Just re-read... and noticed the detail about bruising under his eyes, the soft part... and using concealer under-eye makeup. I can see the mask doing that. Looking forward to the next part you just posted.
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [9 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from spacey
Review:
SO cute!
Comments from author:
thanks!
Review By [spacey] • Date [31 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from starshinedown
Review:
Hooray for Dawn finding happiness! Thank you for the sweet one-shot. Just what I needed this morning. :)
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Review By [starshinedown] • Date [2 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LetsRandom
Review:
I really enjoyed this. I'd enjoy a sequel or even other similar works!
Comments from author:
Thank you so much! I don't know if there will be a sequel but it could happen. Similar works are a definite possibility though!
Review By [LetsRandom] • Date [24 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from LostDragon
Review:
Iys not very common for me to like one shots, however this was done to perfection. I don't know either to ask for a sequel or not???
Comments from author:
Well I'm glad that you enjoyed it, that means a lot to me. I'm not sure if there will be a sequel but I have idea's swirling about in a rather madcap haze at the moment and most are Dawn and Dick so it could happen.
Review By [LostDragon] • Date [22 Apr 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Drix
Review:
Okay, no. You absolutley cannot stop there. What a wonderful epic. Please tell me you have more planned out? Pretty please.
Comments from author:
Lol, nothing planned but I have idea's twirling in my mind. Thanks!
Review By [Drix] • Date [22 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
Bruce: *After she's made her way out* And ^that^, Dick, is why I wear a cape. The bat emblem's the draw fire to the parts I can armor. The cape's because people focus on what they focus on, and my identifiers are ^covered^.
Comments from author:
Oh lord I just laughed so much picturing that. I think Dawn is a bit more than what the Batboys are used to. She doesn't get thrown easily and she can handle emergencies and injuries with a calm that only Alfred seems to possess. I'm glad you enjoyed the story.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [21 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Bouquet
Review:
I've probably read this story four times and I still read it a fifth time!!!

I really hope there will be a sequel -cross my fingers really hard xD- although it would also be great if you wrote a story about Dawn and Tim.

I really liked the way you presented the characters and the way you made the story seem so natural as if an encounter between the two could really happen.

Great job !! :)
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed it so much! To be honest I wasn't sure anyone would like it. I know sometimes I go in weird directions. I'm happy you read it not once, but 5 times?! That's insane but flattering. You might get a sequel out of this. No Dawn/Tim though, sorry.
Review By [Bouquet] • Date [21 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from HarmMarie
Review:
Really loved this.
Comments from author:
I'm so glad, thank you!
Review By [HarmMarie] • Date [21 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Hecatonchires
Review:
WAFFy :)
Review By [Hecatonchires] • Date [21 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Moderator)FaithUnbreakable
Review:
This is painfully adorable. Love it.
Comments from author:
Lol, thanks I appreciate that. I was trying something a little different. I'm glad you liked it.
Review By [(Moderator)FaithUnbreakable] • Date [21 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from spurious
Review:
That was way cute.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
Review By [spurious] • Date [21 Apr 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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