OHH How long are they going to be there? I love that story! I am talking about Sonya there, NOT Twilight! Read the whole thing of those books and felt it was a waste of time. (Mind you they had their good points, but mostly mush and the movies have only made it worse.) So do we get more chapters on this one? PLEASE...
Review By [Eureka] • Date [25 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Right the Wrong" from KevinSchultz
Review:
Thank you! As someone who grew up on the Olympic penninsula, when I first heard that these books were set in Forks, my first thought was "FORKS!? Que?" It's the place you stop to take a leak when you're headed to the Hoh river valley. Thus, it's known in my mind for the quality of its urinals.
That's it.
(Seriously - people who write Twilight fic should look the place up in Wikipedia. The place is two blocks wide and a mile and a half long, bisected by the main road. THERE IS NOTHING THERE. The woods are fantastic, but that's pretty much it.)
Comments from author:
And don't forget wonderful La Push, lol!
Review By [KevinSchultz] • Date [22 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Right the Wrong" from VampireCow
Review:
"Of course, there was the added bonus of Richard getting into a fistfight with nearly everyone in that universe. "
Yes. Oh God. Yes. Edward needs his sparkly face smashed in. Repeatedly. Most of the supernaturals in the Twilight need it, as a matter of fact. Also, loved your comment on how EVERYONE normal knew about the shifters and the vampires, but the vamps and shifters themselves didn't know they knew. Hilarious. Also, true. Secret that is not a secret for the win!
Review By [VampireCow] • Date [22 Apr 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
