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Review of chapter "just a little twist....." from OtteryLexa
Review:
This was really well written, and I am intrigued what plan the SGC might be able to come up with.
My first thought is to get the Asgard in to make her a clone body to move her consciousness to.
Comments from author:
Thank you for your compliment and your suggestion. It is a very interesting one to me because I don't know SGC or paticularly Asgard tech extensively (most of my knowledge of SGC comes from the occasional Sunday morning re-run and fanfic) and hadn't thought of cloning Fred. I kinda like it though....huh.

Thanks again for taking the time to review, OtteryLexa.
Review By [OtteryLexa] • Date [29 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "just a little twist....." from Selonianth
Review:
... Well, only thing I can see him being able to do is askng the Tok'Ra if they can halp but I'm not sure if they could. Illyria Vs Tok'Ra Illyria wins.
Comments from author:
I think that depends on how far the God King has spread into Fred's body. If they manage to catch it before her insides liquidate and her body is turned into a shell, she might have a chance - in that wonderfully crazy scfi/magic way. But I totally agree with you, if Illyria does manifest they don't have a hell of a lot of a chance against her by normal means (and none really that I can think of that would keep Fred's body in any way intact). And Illyria could easily take down any Tok'Ra.

Been awhile since I wrote that and it was fun to slide into that mindset agian, thanks so much for reading and taking the time to review!
Review By [Selonianth] • Date [16 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "just a little twist....." from MBB
Review:
A fitting stand alone/missing scene story.

But about those 5%, I've never seen a Gunn at the SGC story before...
Comments from author:
Gunn just doesn't get enough love. He was a great character and at the time I posted this story it was the only one in the "Gunn-centered" SGC section on this site. That's just a shame.

I don't know when/if I'll get around to a follow through on this though. I really really want to, but life has been kinda crap and I'm having problems staying motivated on the multi-chapter stories I already have going. (And if I continued this it would most likely have to be multi-chaptered.) I seem best able to do ramdom FFA one-shots like the 'Gunn - Harry' and 'Kendra - Percy' ones you read and reviewed (Thanks again, for that :) ).

But this story does keep niggling at my brain...*sigh*.....I am so indecisive.....*laughs*
Review By [MBB] • Date [30 Aug 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "just a little twist....." from (Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
I would love to see this continue.... and Fred saved...

Blue
Comments from author:
Thanks, Blue. This has definitley taken up space in my head as one of the things I will (most likely) work on in the future. However, I am bumping around so much with my other fics at the moment, I am not sure when that will be. I want to do it -right-, if I do it. For me that means re-watching some of the Angel eps like 'Timebomb' to get Illyria-voice down and researching more into who would most likely be able to help out of the Stargate allies. I also don't want to get rid of Gunn's involvement completely since I feel rather bad that he gets so little love in fic.

So, yeah. I probably just went into much more detail than you ever wanted. I apologize for that - I tend to let my mind just go when I start typing sometimes. Thanks again for taking the time to review.
Review By [(Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [16 May 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "just a little twist....." from insomniareader
Review:
This is an awesome one-shot, I'd totally bow to your greatness if you'd add to it!! It was wickedly well written!
Comments from author:
"Wickedly well written" - well you seemed to have found one way to get to this gals heart, alliteration. *giggles*

Thanks so much for the review, but it will probably be a while (if ever) before I do anything else with this. I'm jumping around between so many ideas these days it's kinda ridiculous.

Thanks again though, for commenting. :)
Review By [insomniareader] • Date [29 Apr 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "just a little twist....." from Gideon
Review:
Interesting twist, with a different prrespective perhaps they could do something. If they turn Fred back to normal then there may not be much of a story but if they can just slow the process or stop it halfway or maybe give Fred some control then there may be an Illyria power level Fred to help out in Angel or Hammond's worlds.
Comments from author:
I don't have a sequel planned out, but if I ever write one those are some interesting ideas. I like Fred as the smart-girl who fights with her brain and stubbornness, but it would be interesting to write her suddenly dealing with powers. Hmmm.....

Thanks for the review, you've certainly got my mind moving. :)
Review By [Gideon] • Date [27 Apr 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "just a little twist....." from (Recent Donor)dreamfall
Review:
For what it's worth, I'd be pretty interested in it _not_ being a one-shot. Interesting premise--I'd be glad to see what it lead to...
Comments from author:
I might end up doing more with it in the future, but I have so much I'm playing with now that unless my brain gets stuck on this I probably won't be writing it anytime soon. With how much positive feedback (and suggestions) I've been getting though, it -has- been causing me to think about it a lot more than I initially intended. *laughs*

Thanks bunches for reviewing. For what it's worth, at this point its feeling less like a one-shot and more like a banked future-project. XD
Review By [(Recent Donor)dreamfall] • Date [25 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "just a little twist....." from (Past Donor)lucidity
Review:
This is great! Would love to see where the idea goes!
Comments from author:
Honestly, never completely planned it out past here. Few thoughts, of course but nothing complete. I'm rather happy keeping this a one-shot until my brain starts yelling at me with bits of story or dialogue for another bit *laughs*.

I'm happy you like it though, I don't think Fred or Gunn get enough lovin' in fanfic. :)

Thanks for leaving a review!
Review By [(Past Donor)lucidity] • Date [22 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "just a little twist....." from Kaerie
Review:
Definitely tracking this one, just in case it turns out not to be a one-shot. ;)
Comments from author:
Aww, I thank ya Kaerie. And I'm not fighting it if I suddenly decide there is more I want to write, but -this- was pretty much the bit that was in my head that I wanted to get down. If that happens again in the future, for a sequel or something, then I'm certainly not opposed. I'm pretty happy to write whatever I feel compelled to (and that's starting to sound kinda possessed, like........)

Anyway, thanks for taking the time to review. :)
Review By [Kaerie] • Date [22 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "just a little twist....." from HarmMarie
Review:
Liked this. Wouldn't say no to more.
Comments from author:
Hello again, HarmMarie.

I also won't say know if my muses poke me to write more, I'm just not particularly planning on it. XD

I am delighted though that you liked my writing about Fred (not so little or in her alt-Potterverse this time). And I thank you, as always for reviewing.
Review By [HarmMarie] • Date [22 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "just a little twist....." from tals
Review:
Very nice, cool to see something from Gunn's point of view, it happens so rarely. Also, I'll be tracking this oneshot of yours, just in case. It does work well as a oneshot, stopping just at the edge of a whole lot of lovely potential, but it'd be cool to see how it all comes to fruition (the potential, that is) as well.
either way, thanks for sharing.

Tals
Comments from author:
I was quite surprised to see that after I tagged this as being Gunn-Centered (as well as Fred-Centered), that it was the only one in that category for Stargate-crossover fics. Which honestly, I find kinda sad. Gunn was a cool character and (especially early on) his relationship with Fred was really cute.

And while I don't particularly plan on doing more on this, I appreciate that you have it tracked just in case. Also, thanks for your kind words and for taking the time to review. :)
Review By [tals] • Date [22 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "just a little twist....." from Salric
Review:
Can you make it a 3-shot?

One similar drabble from Hammond's POV, and then one to wrap it up?

It's a good compromise that way between a one-shot a more extended story without getting out of hand.
Comments from author:
*laughs* If I do ever write it, that does sound like a compromise. The problem is, I have no plan to. There are other fics I'm actually working on and this was just something on my mind I wanted to get down. If more for this story comes to me, I won't fight it. I am not, however, actively pursuing it in my brain at this time.

I thank ya very much though for reading my fic and taking the time to review. I appreciate the feedback. :)
Review By [Salric] • Date [22 Apr 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "just a little twist....." from VillageOrchid
Review:
Ah, the Texas connection. For a moment there I wasn't sure if you were playing with the timelines and meant Jack. Yeah... maybe Oma or the kid could battle Illyria before she finishes taking corporeal form.
Comments from author:
Yup, the Texas connection. Dun dun dunnnn. I don't know why, you can just make that sound ominous if you want to.

And for ages and timeliness, I really didn't see Jack as fitting. But, then again, you can do anything with fanfiction I suppose. Hammond was the one that I thought of and I thought worked alright though (especially if you go with the whole wiggle room I gave with the actually her Great-Uncle thing. With that her actual Grandmother (his sister) could have been older than him, making it work even a bit easier).

Anyway, yeah, probably explained that aspect far more than was necessary. XD Thank you for taking the time to review!
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [22 Apr 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "just a little twist....." from Runewolf
Review:
Personally, I think this has a lot of potential, and was very well written. Even if you don't choose to continue it, thanks for sharing it with us. I really enjoyed it.
Comments from author:
I'm glad you enjoyed it. :) Thanks bunches for your lovely words and for taking the time to review. Being able to post on here and have people respond so quickly and kindly - it really does help keep your spirits up and make you want to write more in general.
Review By [Runewolf] • Date [22 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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