I just came back to re-read this again and enjoyed it just as much. Your characterisation of everyone is spot on and I just adore Gwen. I'd love to see an update if you manage to find inspiration and time. :-)
Review By [draconin] • Date [8 Jul 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Good chapter. So the Powers are moving their Pawns around again. (Or more perhaps Queen(s), Knight, and Rooks than Pawns.) Nice to see Spike back and getting along with Jack. Can't wait till he meets Teal'c. Hopefully they'll get along, if for nothing more than sharing some really dark backgrounds before fighting for Good.
Review By [Kremer] • Date [10 Oct 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Excellent series and one that I would eally love to see completed! Love the addition of Spike as a dhamphir. Please, please can we have an update?!! Thank you!
Review By [Ailsam] • Date [28 Sep 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Again, nice chapter. (And did you change/add some to Ch.2 since the day it was posted? There's some added details I don't remember reading then. If so, please let readers know about edits in comments or latest ANs so they can re-read.)
Nitpick: Jack, or someone in SG1 should have said something about not entering the gate until the GDO came back green. Otherwise even Sineya/Gwen would have gone splat against the SGC iris before it opened.
Oh, please please have the Tokra suddenly gate in unannounced! I just want to see Faith and Gwen take Anise down a peg or two (or a dozen) when she tries to again get all arrogant with the 'primitive' Tau'ri at the SGC. :)
Review By [Kremer] • Date [30 May 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]