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The Alien & The Slayer

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Review of chapter "New Arrivals." from Amai
Review:
A very good start. It left me curious to see what happens next.

One little qualm... even though it's third person, it's following Buffy, so to have the comment that the woman is quite Britist struck me as rather out of place. If there was something like, 'and by the sound of her' it would have worked for me, but as it stands, I stopped reading, dropped out of the story, tilted my head and asked my dog (who was the only other in the room at the moment):

"How can someone look 'quite' British? Especially in a pink shirt and jeans. I mean, furs and the crown jewel, sure..."

And then he wandered away because I'd run out rice cakes.

... Anyways ...

I loved the ginger bit. That made me laugh out loud. Off to check the next in series.
Comments from author:
Hahaha thanks for pointing that out to me! I'll have to go back in and fix it. :)
Review By [Amai] • Date [31 Jan 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "New Arrivals." from BrownFinderth
Review:
Very interesting! AND intriguing. I rather like it!!!
Comments from author:
Thank you!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [22 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "New Arrivals." from fandomoverload
Review:
oh i loved this
Comments from author:
thank you! :)
Review By [fandomoverload] • Date [15 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "New Arrivals." from VillageOrchid
Review:
A good crossover. I like how you had the Doctor listening to who "The Slayer" was closely. If she were just some kind of alien serial killer he'd probably stopped her.
Comments from author:
Thank you! :)
Review By [VillageOrchid] • Date [14 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "New Arrivals." from Eureka
Review:
Good start. With the start, I hope the rest is as good.
Comments from author:
Thank you! =)
Review By [Eureka] • Date [26 Apr 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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