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A Timeless Queen

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Review of chapter "Finding Love" from CrystalBlaze
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Needs a tad more tell and a trifle less show.

But yeah, "the moment" is a trifle now-centric, and I can imagine Dawnbeing rather absorbed in losing her virgin status.

The fact that this draws blood and maybe takes them both somewhere just adds to the fun.
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [29 Apr 11] • Not Rated
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