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Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Bad Guys Revealed" from PrincessArien
Review:
Was slightly amusing...only problem with Faith being one of your villains, is Faith came back with Willow from LA...so who's the Faith that came back with Willow after the Angel episode Orpheus? O_o

Edit: True, they definitely didn't need to *have* Angelus in custody to reensoul him. I just felt it a little distracting having Kennedy be Faith when she already should have been there. It's not too major, but if it were me I'd probably go back into the story and add something for that :/
Comments from author:
Fred?

Or maybe Faith never came back to Sunnydale with Willow; it's not as if they had to know where Angelus was for Willow to re-ensoul him.
Review By [PrincessArien] • Date [19 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: A Plan Comes Together" from Difdi
Review:
I do hope that Scooby-Dawn is not a real dog biologically, because chocolate is a deadly poison to dogs. Small amounts result in a condition that is best described (pardon the pun) as "being as sick as a dog". Larger amounts, such as the amounts found in a Shaggy/Scooby smorgasbord centered around chocolate are invariably fatal if consumed by a dog.
Comments from author:
You know, it's funny 'cause my dog has eaten lots of chocolate - against my wishes - and nothing's happened. Then again, it's milk chocolate and dark chocolate is the deadly kind. You can assume that Scooby!Dawn had the same iron digestive system as the real Scooby.
Review By [Difdi] • Date [4 May 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Bad Guys Revealed" from Harry
Review:
Seeing Faith as a Foe in this tale is not how I would have prefered it. I would have made Kenndy the Villianess. I never cared for her attitude and the way she used Willow.
Comments from author:
True, but sometimes I have a hard time buying Faith's redemption plea in season 1 AtS.
Review By [Harry] • Date [2 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: A Trap is Set" from Harry
Review:
Something tells me that the Big Bad is none other than Travers! He always hated Buffy and never wanted her and Giles together as a team.
Comments from author:
And he's stupid enough to think he can beat them.
Review By [Harry] • Date [2 May 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2: A Plan Comes Together" from Harry
Review:
LOL! ROFL! You got them down PERFECTLY as the gang from Scooby Doo! Now, to capture the villian/The First!
Comments from author:
Scary thing is that I didn't even have to remind myself what the Scooby Doo people sounded like.
Review By [Harry] • Date [2 May 12] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: A Wish is Made" from Harry
Review:
*GROAN!* Xander, have you forgotten the #1 rule when it comes to being a Scooby?: NEVER USE THE WORD WISH! You never know WHAT will happen if you use that word!!!
Comments from author:
But...but...if he didn't, this story would already be over!
Review By [Harry] • Date [2 May 12] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Bad Guys Revealed" from (Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
well, at least now I don't have to bother reading the Angel/Twilight saga... and yes, this was probably funnier... those comics were by someone smoking something... something very weird, but boring.

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Comments from author:
At least it wasn't as sick as the Twilight storyline. If I ever had the desire to read the comics - which I didn't - that was bad enough to keep me away from the whole 'season'.
Review By [(Recent Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [20 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 1: A Wish is Made" from firedrakegirl
Review:
This series was wonderful!!! Definitely one of my favorites, just cause it made me laugh so hard.
Comments from author:
It was kinda fun once I got the idea to group all the unusual wins together - even if they weren't part of the same 'verse.
Review By [firedrakegirl] • Date [29 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Bad Guys Revealed" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
I like that Faith is Kennedy.

I would've preferred it if all the special effects (vanishing intangible ghosts) making up the First Evil were actually caused by Spike, because the demon that 'gave him back his soul' in the Season Opener had actually crawled inside him and merged completely/made a home ;)
Comments from author:
Hmm, that could be an interesting alternative.
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [21 Jun 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Bad Guys Revealed" from Gideon
Review:
Much better than Angel as Twilight :) I was a bit suspicious when Spike quoted from the Slayer handbook, so I kinda expected him to be the big bad. I guess he was foiled again. Wait: does this mean he was kinda Quentin Travers when they were boinking all season 6? And I hope she was joking about the Wesley kissing, yuck!
And poor Willow, she should have known better.
Comments from author:
Spike was wearing a mask of Quentin, but over that was a mask of Spike. So he was pretending to be somebody pretending to be himself. Nice and confusing, huh?

Wes had to have gotten better since his kiss with Cordy.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [13 Jun 11] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Bad Guys Revealed" from DesitaniaF
Review:
Angel's Twilight?

Of course whenever I think of Twilight I'm thinking of Sparklepires not the season 8 baddie, but either way...
Comments from author:
Yeah, I think of the Sparklepires too, but when I heard about that storyline from the comics, I was soooo disappointed in Joss.
Review By [DesitaniaF] • Date [9 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Bad Guys Revealed" from clarityfades
Review:
Oh Em Gee. I wish I could stop laughing b/c it's making my back hurt more. Thanks for the crazy!
Comments from author:
Sorry for hurting your back.
Review By [clarityfades] • Date [4 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Bad Guys Revealed" from (Recent Donor)JanessaRavenwood
Review:
Nominally funny, I guess, but seems to be really just an excuse for character bashing.
Comments from author:
Who should it have been? Some random humans we've never heard of? If I really wanted to do some bashing, I would have had Xander, Dawn and Willow as the bad guys - or at least helping them.
Review By [(Recent Donor)JanessaRavenwood] • Date [26 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 4: Bad Guys Revealed" from zigpal
Review:
Great finish. The Troika of Doom, nicely done.
Comments from author:
Thanks. I think I could see them working together.
Review By [zigpal] • Date [20 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3: A Trap is Set" from zigpal
Review:
Great update.

Damn, you should have had Dawn bite Kennedy when she started bitching.

Congrats on your A.
Comments from author:
Hope you like the surprise ending.
Review By [zigpal] • Date [13 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
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