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Review of chapter "Part 9" from Eureka
Review:
Actually had started to think that you gave up on this story. Sorry to hear that Musie had died on you hope this brings it back.

That actually does sound quite a bit like Wills. She never has liked Prophecies and she does run sometimes rather than sit and talk about stuff.
Comments from author:
Sorry I was going to post a 'I haven't given up on the story' message but I hate when people do that.

Yes, as much as I love Willow she is quite frustrating and won't do what I ask her to *grrr* Hope you're enjoying it and that the wait for the next chapter won't be as long.

Have a fantastic Christmas!
Review By [Eureka] • Date [21 Dec 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part 9" from zackcloud
Review:
loved it but willow reaction to the prophecy annoying and how she is always running
Comments from author:
Thanks! Trust me when I say Willow is starting to annoy me too but unfortunately she won't listen to me at all and keeps doing what she wants. I can promise you that she won't be running again! Keep reading and have a great christmas!
Review By [zackcloud] • Date [21 Dec 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part Four" from zackcloud
Review:
loved it you should definetly do it in dean and sam's pov move because it's rare to have good men's pov :)
Review By [zackcloud] • Date [13 Nov 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 8" from zackcloud
Review:
loved it cant wait I'm addicted to this story update soon:)
Comments from author:
Yay! Thanks for your awesome review! Just working on a chapter for a new story and then I'm back to this one! Keep reading!
Review By [zackcloud] • Date [13 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 8" from Red
Review:
I can't wait to see what happens next. I always love Willow and Dean and Sam stories
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review, glad you're enjoying the story. So do I, there definitely needs to be more out there!
Review By [Red] • Date [8 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 8" from nicjphill
Review:
Willow is a lucky lucky girl! Loving it so far and looking forward to the next update!
Comments from author:
Thanks for the review, I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Keep an eye out for my new story!
Review By [nicjphill] • Date [8 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from thecynic
Review:
As you said, this is fanfiction and you are certainly free to write whatever you want. But as I said, or at least tried to indicate, how ever so poorly, I wouldn't have started this if you hadn't removed the AU from your disclaimer. Someday I hope that someone will explain this utter disgust for writing canon Willow that so many authors exhibit. It seems to me that (without accurately counting) there are more Xander slash stories out there than Willow slash (femslash) when canon Willow was gay and Xander was not. Consider me confused.
Comments from author:
I hope so too! Maybe you yourself could try to correct this by writing a story or two yourself. In the end my only wish is a happily ever after for everyone LGBT or straight.
Review By [thecynic] • Date [7 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 8" from Eureka
Review:
Love the story so far. Just found it after your newest chapter of course.
thecynic really needs to put their comments as private since they are not nice. Sorry but I really hate when someone has to pitch a fit over a writer's work and they make it to where anyone can read it. It really taints a person's ideas of the story.

As for me, I know from watching years of the show that Wills was Bi. She cared for Oz and for Tara. Ken, I think was too much of a butch to really put any male/female ideas out there. Plus she was a real bitch.

To think that Wills can be happy with 2 guys, yes it is possible. Glad I found your story. I now have it on tracker so that when you DO post your next chapter I will see it.
Comments from author:
Thanks so much for your positive comments! I'm glad I'm not offending too many people. Keep reading and keep an eye out for my new story!
Review By [Eureka] • Date [7 Oct 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from thecynic
Review:
Yeah, but gay folks do.
Comments from author:
Yeah I know they do, I don't have a problem with gay people. I'm sorry if it's coming across that way. I'm simply not choosing to write Willow that way.
Review By [thecynic] • Date [7 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from thecynic
Review:
Sorry again, this doesn't answer my question. Why are you calling your character Willow when it isn't Willow? Despite your opinion, Willow is gay basically because Whedon says she is gay. It goes like this, only the gods of the various verses can determine the sexuality of their characters, Joss is the god of the Buffyverse, Joss says Willow is gay, therefore Willow is gay. I don't want to be picking on you since there are so many examples of this delusion, but your original disclaimer, iirc, said that this was slightly AU. Now the disclaimer says nothing about being AU. I think that this story is extremely AU. YMMV.
Comments from author:
You're right, I should have said this is extremely AU. Then again that is what I see the point of fanfiction being. People writing stories of characters they like but changing the things they don't like.

I'm sorry if you don't like the story, I understand your reservations but just remember it is only a story and is very AU as witches and vampires don't really exist.
Review By [thecynic] • Date [7 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Part 8" from thecynic
Review:
Sorry, I seem to be in a perverse mood tonight so I'm going to ask which BTVS character are you actually talking about? You say that it is Willow, but Willow is a lesbian, she's gay, a homosexual, she's queer as hell. Now given her preferences why do you think that she would be attracted to a threesome with a couple of guys? Obviously you can't be talking about Willow Rosenberg, so why are you calling your character by that name? Now I've only read the first chapter and a half before I became disgusted with you premise, but really, why are you calling your primary character Willow when this character has no relationship with the canon Willow? Curious minds and whatnot.
Comments from author:
Hi,

Thanks for your question. My Willow is not cannon Willow at all. I don't really see Willow as gay, if anything I see her as bisexual. Don't forget at the beginning of the series she liked men and I've cut this story off at the beginning of the series so she hasn't yet discovered she likes women too. I see Willow as more falling for the person not the gender.

I hope I answered your question.

Bec
Review By [thecynic] • Date [7 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from zackcloud
Review:
omg i cant wait for u to update i love this story =}
Comments from author:
Thanks so much for the review. Sorry about the delays. Keep reading :)
Review By [zackcloud] • Date [28 Sep 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from RivanWarrioress
Review:
That was really good. I loved big brother angel, although i was a tad worried that he might castrate the Winchester boys (although, I'm sure that if he did that, then Cordy would castrate him and the rest of the boys in the AI gang.)

Just had a really cute mental picture of the twins playing with baby Connor (who, given Angel's big brotherliness of Willow, would be like their cousin) Nawwww. Can't you imagine the Willow/Winchester twins growing up alongside the Destroyer?

Anyway, gushing over. An excellent update...Hope to see more soon.

R.W.
Review By [RivanWarrioress] • Date [5 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 7" from lillyb
Review:
Wow with all the different perspectives I know how difficult this must be to plan out but some how you make it look easy, great job!
Comments from author:
Thanks so much! It really wasn't easy but having a great Beta is the key! Hope you're enjoying the story.
Review By [lillyb] • Date [4 Aug 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Part Six" from Vampswitch
Review:
Stop giving me credit for your story. All I do is make some suggestions and point some things out, which would be absolutly meaningless if you hadn't thought of and wrote the story. It is you who deserves all the reviews and readers you get, you really earned them. By the way, I'm still surprised that so few people review the story. There seem to be many readers, as one can see on the statistics, but only very few people review. Thats sad. But I guess some people just don't have time, you know? Then there are also those who don't read the story on the computer, but rather print it out to read then and then don't go back just to write a review. It's still unfortunate that so many don't share their opinion and tell the author how they like, or don't like, the story. But, oh well, I'll just have to write an extra long review then, right? :-)
Luckily, my memory is so bad that I forgot what I wrote to you about the chapter already, so I'll just say everything again.
I loooooooooooooooove the possessive/overprotective sides of Sam and Dean. I really like how you managed to put so much feeling into their words and actions. Like when Dean realised that Willow is pregnant and was so moved and overjoyed that he gently kissed her forehead and then when Sam insisted to make sure Willow is okay and go back into the medical centre, rather then argue more with Dean. How they reacted to the (young and intelligent and talented and wonderful...;-)) Doctor was great. the suspicion about her proficiency fueled by their worry for Willow and then the whole: I'm the father; no, I'm the father. Damn, I would have been confused too if I were the doctor. :-)
I absolutely adored how Dean and Sam reacted to the first life signs of their babies.That was just beautiful. And then Dean just scooping Willow up and carrying her out, thus demonstrating that she now has to deal with two overprotective males who won't let her lift a finger if she doesn't nesseccarily have to. Makes one kinda dissapointed that the next scene was about Bobby finding our two fathers-to-be unconcious and Willow nowhere to be found. But I'm pretty sure we will get to see some serious "Dean and Sam are fussing over Willow like there is no tomorrow" as soon as they have found her again and cleared the air between them. I really like the way Bobby always refers to Angel as the 'damn vamp'. It sounds almost petulant, really cute in its own way. They are a little like the father-figure and the brother-figure competing for Willows favour.
At this point, I need to congratulate Dean and Sam for keeping their mouthes shut while Bobby was explaining the prophecy to them and about his knowing Willow rather well. That must have been really hard. I'm really curious how Willow is going to react when she hears about the prophecy. Will she doubt Dean and Sams feelings for her are genuine and if she does, what will the two brothers have to do to convince her of the contrary? After they both only really got to spend one night with her, even though that was enough to manifest their feelings for one another, I would really like to see them have some quality 'woo' time.
I hope Dean and Sam don't react too badly to the news of Willow being a witch. They seemed to have taken her being a Hunter quite well, unless they still have secret doubts or something like that. It's really good that Bobby already revealed that fact, so Dean and Sam have time during the car ride to come to terms with it and hopefully not say the wrong thing when they find Willow. By the way, I guess I can understand her confusion, alone the way that Dean and Sam acted when they got ready to go after Willow gives some impression of what kind of talk took place between the three of them. Bobby seems to have caught on to that too.
I'm soooo looking forward to the new chapter and I really hope that I won't remain the only one to review this chapter. There are many people who read this story, it should be expected that at least some of them review too.
Damn, time to go to work again. I should really just quit. Then I would have so much more time to read and do other fun things... but then I wouldn't have money.... damn.
Oh well, hope to hear again from you soon, have a great weekend. *hug*
Comments from author:
Damn Key! What a review.....you are way too modest though and I want everyone to know just how fabulous you are! *HUG*
Review By [Vampswitch] • Date [24 Jun 11] • Not Rated
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