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Darkness Loses a Warrior

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Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Harry
Review:
*Stands up and throws a salute* TO ALL the men and women responsible for bringing that *T%*E()E*E* DOWN! May they never be forgotten and be remembered by ALL who fight the good fight for all humanity!
Review By [Harry] • Date [8 Jun 12] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Gideon
Review:
Well I can tell that you wrote it in a hurry, some sections are a little unclear, but the general idea comes across clearly. It is nice to think of all of our heroes fighting the good fight, even if sometimes they cannot save us from real life. That said I am not sure I am glad that he is dead. Relieved perhaps, but Al Quaeda was defeated shortly after 9/11 when the world came together in opposition to them and everything they stood for. They just hadn't realised it yet. Removing their base in Afganistan was also crucial though and continuing to put pressure on them in places like Pakistan is important too. Any one man pales in comparison.
Review By [Gideon] • Date [5 May 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from FireWolfe
Review:
I so agree its good someone wasted the bastard. To bad it took so long. I just wish I could see his face when he wakes in hell. Hopefully the devil will have a nice warm pit for him.
Fire
Comments from author:
Yeah, me an Xander are doing the Snoopy dance. (Not a pretty sight.)
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [3 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from CPTSkip
Review:
Oo-rah!
Review By [CPTSkip] • Date [2 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from WolfWriter
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Shocked the heck out of me when I read this morning that he was dead.

Glad to hear it though; even if it DID take ten years!
Review By [WolfWriter] • Date [2 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from lindiel
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I don't get the hype of bin laden being dead. All it will do is give us a false sense of security. Groups like Al-Quaida and the Taliban aren't like the armies of the 18th, 19th, and early 20th centuries. Back then you could cut off the head, and the body would die, now they're more like Hydras, cut off the head and two more take its place, just as venemous as the last, if not more so.
Review By [lindiel] • Date [2 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from jormunguard
Review:
OOpsie. When you introduced Eliot Spencer you accidentally said that they were looking for Obama instead of Osama. Other than that a good bit of writing.
Review By [jormunguard] • Date [2 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from addictedtwotext
Review:
"Eliot Spencer was a member of one of the premier con artist teams in the USA, but had been as helpless as the rest of them in managing to find OBAMA due to his work."

Wait....WHO???

"That is the character's name, double checked wiki just now."

Wow..I had no idea Spencer was such a racist. Does Hardison know he feels this way?

EDIT - Added emphasis. unhid review since author refuses to admit mistake and changed rating.
Comments from author:
That is the character's name, double checked wiki just now.


No, that was me putting the wrong name in while listeing to Obama's speech I apologize for the confusion I did fix it though.
Review By [addictedtwotext] • Date [2 May 11] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from RandomSelection
Review:
Site rules aside (no merntion of real life persons allowed), in my opinion one shuold not mix real life politics and fanfiction. Be glad or relieved Bin Laden is dead, but don't use this as a reason to write about fictional characters. It seems a poor way to honor the countless victims of terrorism.
Comments from author:
Sorry it seems to offend you, in my thinking it was acknowledging what others had done for us. My only defense is I was on a high when I wrote it.

The rules say: You may use a real person as a character in a story only if using that specific person is required to portray a scene realistically.
Review By [RandomSelection] • Date [2 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)Shieldage
Review:
Comedians, over the world, mourn the loss of a good punchline.
Review By [(Current Donor)Shieldage] • Date [2 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from (Current Donor)DeacBlue
Review:
I don't think the wanker deserves that much of a tribute. That said, *raises a glass to his fallen brothers and sisters*
Review By [(Current Donor)DeacBlue] • Date [2 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from clairedavies
Review:
I like that, maybe you should do one with the buddies mourning over him. It's about time they got him.
Review By [clairedavies] • Date [2 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from bsams
Review:
ooorah!!!!
i think the only one you missed that would have fit in was robocop!
Dead or Alive you're coming with me
Review By [bsams] • Date [2 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Rorschach
Review:
Awesome little ficlet, I was feeling great that they got the slippery bastard. Osama Bin Laden is dead, I'd call that a WIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Review By [Rorschach] • Date [2 May 11] • Not Rated
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