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Review of chapter "are you ready?" from deathgeonous
Review:
This was interesting. Makes me want more of it as well. Well, thanks for writing this, and goodbye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [13 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "are you ready?" from deathgeonous
Review:
Sweet fic. Thanks for writing this, and bye for now.
Comments from author:
Super late in my reply to this, deathgeonous - and I very much apologize for that. Just as much as I thank you for reviewing! (And bye to you - for now - as well!)
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [13 May 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "are you ready?" from soichan
Review:
This is amazing! I love stories like this, good job!
Review By [soichan] • Date [13 Nov 13] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "are you ready?" from (Current Donor)Katrina
Review:
I liked this very much. Thank you for sharing it.
Comments from author:
You are very welcome. Thank -you- for taking the time to review.
Review By [(Current Donor)Katrina] • Date [11 Apr 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "are you ready?" from deathgeonous
Review:
Ah, this really shouldn't stay a one shot. Just my option on the matter. Well, thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [17 Mar 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "are you ready?" from deathgeonous
Review:
Nice one shot, although I think you could have done more with it. Ah well... thanks for writing this, bye for now.
Comments from author:
I did this one-shot as an FFA - just simply choosing the two characters of Willow and Storm from the list, brainstorming how they might meet/interact, and starting to write. There wasn't much forethought or plans for continuing. It was only afterwards that I started thinking about it, started thinking about how that sort of connection I had given Willow might be used.

It still intrigues me, but all-in-all I think this one actually sits alright as a one-shot. Thanks for your continued review deathgeonous.
Review By [deathgeonous] • Date [12 Feb 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "are you ready?" from Taryn
Review:
That's it? *whimper* Really?

This is a good story. Great way of ending it but REALLY? That's it? No more. Done. Finished. The end? Really? *whimper*

I'm gunna.... go.... cry now.
Comments from author:
Oh dear, I'm sorry. * internet hugs *

But honestly, this was simply an FFA response - I have no intention of making it multi-chaptered. I am delighted you enjoyed it so much though and thanks for taking the time to review.
Review By [Taryn] • Date [10 Oct 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "are you ready?" from (Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy
Review:
This is how a story starts out prose and ends up poetry. This is a demonstration of how one can be full of poetry and full of win too! That was lyrical and surprising.

Blue
Comments from author:
"...full of poetry and full of win too!" - that really made me smile.

This was just experimenting with doing an FFA for fun, but then it kinda got stuck with the idea of Willow being bonded to the Earth - the Earth's avatar of sorts that has been kicking around my brain for awhile now. That also goes along with a whole series of things that I -really- don't have time to pursue with all of the things I'm already writing and want to write. *sigh*

Thanks for reviewing, Blue. I'm glad you enjoyed it. :)
Review By [(Current Donor)DeepBlueJoy] • Date [17 May 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "are you ready?" from angrymonkey
Review:
Creative idea, it would be interesting to see a piece from Storm's POV.
Comments from author:
Don't know if I could write that. I've never read the comics and I don't feel like I have a good enough handle on her speech or personality for writing from the inside of Storm's head.

Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [angrymonkey] • Date [7 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "are you ready?" from RafMereC
Review:
Nice
Comments from author:
Thank ya kindly, RafMereC! I appreciate comments. :)
Review By [RafMereC] • Date [7 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "are you ready?" from Gideon
Review:
Interesting compare and contrast between this Willow and Storm. Now that Willow can move between dimensions she could end up anywhere! Maybe next time she could bring her friends along?
Comments from author:
Not sure where I'll be taking it. I just know that a Willow that can move between dimensions is a useful tool in crossover story writing and one that opens up a whole lot of possibilities.

I quite enjoy both of the characters: Willow & Storm. And I think if you take them side by side, especially post-chosen, you can find a lot of similarities.

Thanks for reviewing!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [7 May 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "are you ready?" from Lucinda
Review:
oooooh, interesting!

Now you've got me imagining what those two could get up to, their conversations, the shock Storm would feel at meeting someone who at the same time is so different than herself and yet has such similarity in her power...

Very thought provoking.
Comments from author:
When I first saw the Willow FFA for Storm, I was intrigued. Then later when I was doing something else, the phrase came to my mind: "her fellow white-eyed almost-goddess". And I knew I need to write a bit for it. I think Storm and a post-Chosen Willow would get along quite well.

I'm glad you found it thought provoking, I often find your stories so as well. I adore your Willow/X-Men stuff (and your non-cross Coffee series, though I admit the need to catch up) - I've actually been a bit tentative when I venture into X-Men territory though, since I never read the comics. :)

Thanks for taking the time to review!
Review By [Lucinda] • Date [6 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "are you ready?" from Keshkreature
Review:
Very cool set up for the repercussions of Willow's scythe activities. I liked the idea of her being able to get to Storm by the Earth's link to all of its other selves.
Comments from author:
Willow changed the world (in a way) with what she did, it's only fair play for it to change her back. *laughs*

I'm glad you liked the semi-abnormal way I get Willow to the X-Men universe. I might use this Willow-linked-to-all-Earth's in the future. I haven't quite decided......

Thanks bunches though for reviewing, Keshkreature.
Review By [Keshkreature] • Date [6 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "are you ready?" from Thedruid
Review:
Good set-up, but is there a follow through?
Comments from author:
Of Willow and Storm? Probably not. That was just a FFA response. I do, however, have plans for connected-to-all-Earth's Willow.

Thanks for reviewing.
Review By [Thedruid] • Date [6 May 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
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