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A Whole New World

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Review of chapter "Chapter One: New World" from CrystalBlaze
Review:
Blipvert!
Review By [CrystalBlaze] • Date [9 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: New World" from Gideon
Review:
I think this story could have benefitted from one more edit before posting. I'm not sure what Xander was trying to say when he said Willow was "hen gay" so I assume it is a typo. It is a nice idea to be able to meet your heros though, and isn't that what the scoobies are to all of us?
Comments from author:
I fixed the mistake. Thanks!
Review By [Gideon] • Date [8 May 11] • Rating [4 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One: New World" from Valandar
Review:
Aaaaand... someone had no clue what "Berserk", the Anime, is...
Review By [Valandar] • Date [8 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: New World" from StriderMew
Review:
I only got 3 letters for this: WTF?
Review By [StriderMew] • Date [8 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One: New World" from djhardim
Review:
Okay. A couple of corrections -

"Hello, I'm Superman, and I wasnted to stake your hand because you're one of the ones who saved all of us."

I think you mean wanted rather than wasnted and shake rather than stake.
Comments from author:
Yeah. I fixed the typos.
Review By [djhardim] • Date [8 May 11] • Not Rated
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