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Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from RedCalypso
Review:
Very good premise, and kudos for avoiding Tara's death and Willow's meltdown. It's good to see Willow learning a much-needed lesson.

On the negative side, why did Xander and Tara put off getting married until AFTER the baby was born? That simply makes no sense. Call me old-fashioned, but that's how I feel. Secondly, I really disliked the ceremony being disrupted. That's supposed to be the bride's special day. It would have been better if God and company watched invisibly.
Review By [RedCalypso] • Date [26 Dec 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from Netchka
Review:
Wonderful story. Is rhere going to be a sequel? Please?
Comments from author:
I am not planning a sequel at this time as I have other works to complete. I am sorry, if you wish to write the sequel yourself please let me know as I would be willing to work with you on such a sequel. otherwise I am afraid you'll have to wait. (Razial)
Review By [Netchka] • Date [30 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from (Recent Donor)Deamondeathstone
Review:
If you turned Xander into a girl after the impregnating part , it might've been a little more believable. Xander turning into a girl to make sure Tara is happy is more realistic then Tara going straight. Afterall Xander would go great lengths for his girls no?
Review By [(Recent Donor)Deamondeathstone] • Date [27 May 11] • Rating [3 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 3" from LFW
Review:
The only thing that could have been better is if Elizabeth Hurley, the Devil had attended and cried too.
Comments from author:
Now there is an idea I did not think about, but then I have not seen that film for a while so it never accured to me. Still it would have been funny, but too late now. (razial)
Review By [LFW] • Date [24 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 (V1.1 17.05.11)" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
Nice. Willow must learn the consequences of her actions. But yay! Baby! Wheee! A baby from Xander and Tara will be absolutely adorable!
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [17 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 (V1.1 17.05.11)" from uten
Review:
It looks like a few people are missing the point..

The Goddess didn't "screw with two innocent victims to punish someone else". The goddess took advantage of Willow's decision to rape the two people closest to her to alter the destinies of both Xander and Tara. You even stated that virtually outright. And given Tara's faith in the Goddess, I can even see her accepting becoming Xander-sexual even if she could remember her time with Willow.

Still, another very interesting chapter, with a great deal happening.

One thing that struck me as strange is the fact that the Goddess only changed history for Xander and Tara, with everyone else remembering they weren't lovers. I sorta thought the only two that would remember the original reality would have been Buffy and Willow, given the shield.

I am really looking forward to seeing where you plan to take this story, especially given Buffy's reaction to all this.

P.S. I did read the note in the first chapter, but had been pulled into the story so quickly I forgot the note by the time I reached the end of chapter one.
Review By [uten] • Date [16 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 (V1.1 17.05.11)" from mendal
Review:
It doesn't matter how its justified, the goddess is a nasty bitch for screwing with two innocent victims to punish someone else.
Comments from author:
you might want to reread ch 1 again, after a discussion between Razial and me (Hawklan) we changed the story a bit.
Review By [mendal] • Date [16 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One - (V1.1 17.05.11)" from Frardowin
Review:
Still trying to figure out why slash is defined the way it is.

Why isn't slash considered a pairing that goes againt the character's established sexuality?

Like say when Tara goes hetero?
Review By [Frardowin] • Date [16 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 (V1.1 17.05.11)" from winddancer
Review:
A lot of angst, love and like any good story, hope. A really good read. I look foreword to more. Thank you Author, for your time and effort. Well done.
Review By [winddancer] • Date [16 May 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 (V1.1 17.05.11)" from Maltor
Review:
I think you handled 'The Morning After' quite well... so how will the rest of the afternoon/evening go? Dawn's reaction kinda puzzled me though, it seems to me like she embraced the changes with the Tara/Xander relationship a little to quickly and easily. It almost seems like she just can't wait for them to setup up house together so she can move in as well and look to them as her new adoptive parents
Review By [Maltor] • Date [16 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter 2 (V1.1 17.05.11)" from djhardim
Review:
Okay, one correction

"You're right. I just hope one day they can forgive me," Willow said, already -- excepting -- that there would be a huge argument and she would accept the blame placed on her.

I think you mean accepting rather excepting.
Comments from author:
yepp u r right. Sorry overlooked that one, but now it's fixed. Tx for pointing it out (Hawklan)
Review By [djhardim] • Date [16 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One - (V1.1 17.05.11)" from PATM
Review:
Those Gods, what a out of control bunch. Willow is an idiot alright but Taras supposed back story is thrown out of the window for a hook up of the most salacious type ever. A gentle soul deep throating Xander at the behest of a gods adjustment for a miss applied spell makes it hard to expect there to be an up side and a baby to mitigate this peculiar turn of events.
Review By [PATM] • Date [12 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One - (V1.1 17.05.11)" from DarkFaerieYumi
Review:
OMG! I love it! I LOVE! They are soooooo cute together! I mean don't get me wrong I loved that Tara was with Willow but I always felt Xander understood her better than Willow. He was very attached to her almost immediately. It was obvious. But this is wonderful. Willow must learn and this is probably one of the most painful way possible and hopefully will drive it home.
Review By [DarkFaerieYumi] • Date [12 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One - (V1.1 17.05.11)" from darkcarnage
Review:
Another great story. Can't wait to see how the fall out of the spell plays out.
Review By [darkcarnage] • Date [12 May 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter One - (V1.1 17.05.11)" from LFW
Review:
Fun start.
If Willow has her power bound she is not going to cast anything against Xander and Tara but is she and Buffy going to drive them out of Sunnydale by being brats?
Hoping for more
Review By [LFW] • Date [11 May 11] • Rating [9 out of 10]
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