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Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Three" from slmncpm
Review:
i loved the story, the end was a bit rushed, but i understand wanting to be finished with it. thank you!
Comments from author:
Thank You...This story was not meant to be finish, but I had had gotten such great feedback about Second Chance that I took a chance on the original.
Review By [slmncpm] • Date [10 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Three" from sjyu
Review:
I enjoyed reading this story. I only look for perfection when I pay for something. When reading fanfic, we have to remember that you do it because you have a story in your brain that you want to share. As long as it's readable, it's ok.
Comments from author:
Thank you...I am just Po'd at some of the comments I would get. But Just recently it dawn on me, that's their opinion. Everyone is not the same. Not everyone love the same thing. While I will not flame others fanfiction writers because i don't like the way they characterize, others might do so.
Review By [sjyu] • Date [9 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Three" from mithrilandtj
Review:
Oh come on
You're not even going to continue thru the birth?
Review By [mithrilandtj] • Date [9 Nov 14] • Rating [9 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Three" from Katt
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I liked the story and I'm glad to see you writing again. Keep it up =)

Katt
Review By [Katt] • Date [8 Nov 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Three" from MadHobbit
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this story makes me wonder what if LOKI picked someone else? Willow? Sam? or made Jack the mother? Rabbit Test or Junior? with Buffy the "Father" A real test of being a Surrogate.
Review By [MadHobbit] • Date [8 Nov 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Three" from serenityselena
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reading a new chapter was great even if it was the last one...
Buffy and Jack deserve to be happy ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [8 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Three" from serenityselena
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reading a new chapter was great even if it was the last one...
Buffy and Jack deserve to be happy ^_^
Review By [serenityselena] • Date [8 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Three" from FireWolfe
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This was nicely done. Occish or not it does make valid points. Besides life is often about perceptions. They may not be the same for everyone. Its why they say hind sight is 20/20. What we feel in the moment may not stay the same ten minutes or a year from now as anything that is remotely the same. Our actions reflect that and that's what your characters did. Act in the moment with the information and cards they were dealt. So great work.
Review By [FireWolfe] • Date [8 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Three" from Valy
Review:
Hi
I just wanted to tell you that this is a lovely and I think a great story. I started chapter 1 and could not stop reading it until I finished it. Love how you melded both story lines and made it into one.

Thank you for creating this wonderful story.
Janissa
Review By [Valy] • Date [8 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty-Three" from MadHobbit
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good story, i got ripped on my short story also , it is a learning process. one small question. no Dawn? don't let all the negs hurt you, like they say its not how many times you fall,its how many times you get up. keep on writing
Review By [MadHobbit] • Date [8 Nov 14] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from Wise
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"Buffy Summers awoke one morning pregnant and have her having no idea who the father is..."

So she got an abortion. The end.
Review By [Wise] • Date [7 Nov 14] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Twenty" from grd
Review:
Way to shove it all down their throats! Excellent!
Comments from author:
Thank you for taking the time to review... i will be posting the rest of this story as time permit without being Beta. Sorry about the errors.
Review By [grd] • Date [7 Nov 14] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter Seven" from (Current Donor)BaronScrewtape
Review:
Okaaaaay...


So... basically you have Buffy being raped by Loki using O'Neill's sperm, and she does not have severe issues with this? You have her being waaaay to accepting.

And Thor is EXTREMELY OOC as well... he would view what Loki has done as an atrocity, and would not have suggested it was an 'honor' for Buffy to be forcefully impregnated by a deranged member of his species. And while the Asgard had respect for O'Neill, they never treated him like he was a god.

Realistically, you have a very angsty, deep premise here with very complicated issues that you are just skimming over to focus on the 'laughs' of a very heroic young woman who has already had 'higher powers' force all sorts of miserable shit on her being forcibly impregnated with the baby of a man who has issues with alien beings (or anyone) abusing children... which he would consider Buffy to still be.

Yep all sorts of comedy gold here. Think I will pass on reading any more of this.
Comments from author:
Thanks for ripping into me...I just love it!!!!! I am not looking for a bed of roses praise, but something positive here would have nice.
Review By [(Current Donor)BaronScrewtape] • Date [23 Apr 14] • Rating [1 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Chapter One" from DieselDriver
Review:
Someone needs to teach this author how to properly use the English language. The story idea is good but the wording is so bad that I simply cannot stand to read it.
Review By [DieselDriver] • Date [20 Aug 13] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Chapter Nineteen" from BrownFinderth
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So, this is the expanded version of 2nd chance, eh? Well, I'm certainly looking forward to reading more of this story as the author continues to write it!!! I really, really liked the chapter wherein Buffy got an orgasm over the food she was eating!!
Review By [BrownFinderth] • Date [21 Jan 12] • Not Rated
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