That was ridiculously cute. And awesome. I loved your Puck, and I really enjoyed his take on the supernatural world, and how it bled over into his day to day life. I also especially enjoyed Santana and Brittnay. Great job.
Comments from author:
Thanks!
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Review By [SlowMercury] • Date [13 May 11] • Not Rated
I enjoyed this! A very good meld of both shows. I always thought Brittany's remark about the sewers was a Buffy nod LOL. If you're thinking of writing more, you've got my vote!
Comments from author:
Currently, I don't have plans to continue this verse. It was written purely as a birthday fic for a friend.
Love it! It's really fast-paced and covers several years...are you going to follow the different viewpoints to be able to keep that pace. (I'd love Brittany's point of view, or Santana's, or Sue's).
Comments from author:
This will remain a one-shot. It was written for a friend's birthday and I don't have any plans to continue it at the moment.
Glad you liked!
Review By [fatewalker] • Date [12 May 11] • Not Rated
I don't see Puck as gay; it just doesn't fit the Puckasaurus vibe. I also don't think Slayers would get called as young as Sarah, even with the spell. The Dalton creeps as demons, though? Completely believable. Brittany as a Slayer and Santana as her bruja totally makes sense, and I suspect Rachel's singing voice is some sort of supernatural gift of its own.
My own inclination, if you wanted Puck to be your viewpoint character, would be to add a sister, maybe a couple years younger than Noah. Hannah gets called when she's 11 or 12, and Noah's 14, and the rest of the story plays out as you write it. Her being at Slayer school explains why we never see her.
Generally, a good job. Thanks!
Comments from author:
I have my own beliefs about Puck's sexuality, but that's a long explanation that I don't want to put into this and take up the entire page. I'll leave it down to that it's a matter of interpretation of a character's scenes and how a person analyzes them. People read into stuff differently. This fic was labelled as slash in the warnings and in the summary, saying who the slash was between, so (and I don't want to sound rude) it was your choice to read it despite the slash. While I don't necessarily believe Puck is gay, I do believe he isn't completely straight.
As for the age Sarah got called, that's a matter of the author's choice. I've seen fics where they get called as teenagers and ones where they get called as young as infancy. I've never read the comics that followed the show, but as I see it, Willows spell called all the Potentials. All means all. As a result, Sarah was called young.
Glad you liked the parts you liked.
Review By [ScorpioP] • Date [12 May 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
