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Review of chapter "Attack...II" from nadirjohn
Review:
I hope your muse sends you back this story soon.
Review By [nadirjohn] • Date [29 Jun 13] • Rating [8 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Am I Buffy?" from AlphaBeta
Review:
Is this story dead?
Comments from author:
No.

I have plans for it.

just got side tracked with other stories.

Raf
Review By [AlphaBeta] • Date [6 Nov 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Attack...II" from AlphaBeta
Review:
Please update this story soon!
Comments from author:
I will at some point, just not now.

Raf
Review By [AlphaBeta] • Date [29 May 12] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Attack..." from AlphaBeta
Review:
Thanks for the stats! Hope to see more for the rest soon!
Comments from author:
You're welcome.

I should get some time after this semester's finished to update more often.

Raf
Review By [AlphaBeta] • Date [11 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of chapter "Attack..." from Genuka
Review:
Interesting. You might get more readers if you provide a sort of prolouge and lead up at the beginning. I'm gonna keep watch on this.
Comments from author:
Sorry it took so long to get back to you, but I got busy this Summer and went back to school in the fall. I'm waiting for a server to finish it's updates in the lab right now and I thought I'd get back to this while I have a bit of time.

I've been adding the background bit by bit in almost every chapter. I'm doing the prologue from the perspective of the characters as they get introduced to build the bigger picture.

I'm not sure if that's enough or not.

It's something new, for me anyway. That I'm trying out.

If you're having a problem piecing it together I'll write up a separate story retelling what happened on Halloween.

Let me know.

Raf.
Review By [Genuka] • Date [10 Jun 11] • Not Rated
Review of story "Am I Buffy? Or Dawn..." from AlphaBeta
Review:
Would not mind seeing some stats on these guys.
Review By [AlphaBeta] • Date [6 Jun 11] • Not Rated • Add Comment
Review of story "Am I Buffy? Or Dawn..." from QundraDraconum
Review:
Tried to read it, but probably as I'm not familiar with Rifts it's to confusing. Good luck with the story, what I am able to understand is fairly interesting.
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review.

I'll try to explain things in the story without going into game mechanics.

Raf
Review By [QundraDraconum] • Date [2 Jun 11] • Not Rated • Edit Comment
Review of story "Am I Buffy? Or Dawn..." from cjcold
Review:
Interesting update.

I liked the explanation of why Cordelia and Joyce were in the Rift world when the others reverted.

Nice job showing Joyce's kindness and Xander's infinite support of his 'women'.

Look forward to the mission into the Federation of Magic, Xander has a promise to keep afterall.

Mores soon please.
Comments from author:
will try to update whenever possible.
Thank you for the review.
Raf
Review By [cjcold] • Date [1 Jun 11] • Rating [7 out of 10] • Edit Comment
Review of chapter "Preparations..." from Gideon
Review:
Standing up to Cordy is one way to get some respect from her :) I'm glad Dawn also has her mother with her in this new world.
Comments from author:
Well sort of. It's Joyce, but not the original.
And neither is Cordy for that matter.

It'll be explained in the next installment.

Thank you for the review.

Raf
Review By [Gideon] • Date [31 May 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "Preparations..." from Hanzo
Review:
♫♥I look forward to reading what happens next in your story♥♪
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review.
Raf
Review By [Hanzo] • Date [30 May 11] • Rating [10 out of 10]
Review of story "Am I Buffy? Or Dawn..." from Gideon
Review:
Ok, still a bit confused but the list of characters and their counterparts at the start of the chapter really helped. maybe next time you could put that in the first chapter? It is difficult to deal with such a large cast of characters in a single story so good luck! I'm glad the staff of evil lost. Good to see Cordy is just as ruthless with beheadings as she was with fashion advice. It came in handy here :)
So what impact will Buffy and the others have on the coalition forces?
Comments from author:
Can't give the plot away for the next few chapters.

Thank you for the review.
RAF
Review By [Gideon] • Date [29 May 11] • Rating [6 out of 10] • Edit Comment
Review of story "Am I Buffy? Or Dawn..." from docfeng
Review:
Update soon, please!
Comments from author:
Thank you for the review.
RAF
Review By [docfeng] • Date [29 May 11] • Rating [8 out of 10] • Edit Comment
Review of chapter "The Girls" from Gideon
Review:
Good to see some more BTVS characters even if they are not the ones I would have expected. Bad news with that staff trying to corrupt Harmony. Will Joyce recognize what the staff is? Is the real Buffy around somewhere too?
Also I am unclear if Cordy killed her mount on purpose or not? Was it evil?
Comments from author:
Yes. Joyce was told what it was.

Real Buffy is in Sunnydale.

Cordy didn't kill her mount.

Varles is a 20 feet long tentacle monster. A minion of the Splugorth.

Very Evil.

Thank you for the review.
RAF
Review By [Gideon] • Date [29 May 11] • Rating [7 out of 10]
Review of chapter "The Girls" from cjcold
Review:
Nice update.

So Xander and crew were not the only ones from SunnyD to be rifted. Interesting. Should be amusing when they meet up.

Still hoping for a continuation of your other Rifts stories, but as long as you keep writing something I am not complaining.

More soon please.
Review By [cjcold] • Date [28 May 11] • Rating [6 out of 10]
Review of chapter "A Plea for Help." from AlphaBeta
Review:
Good chapter. Hope to see more soon.
Comments from author:
Will do.

Thank you for the review.

Raf
Review By [AlphaBeta] • Date [15 May 11] • Not Rated
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